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Ariadne   

This is one of my poems I didn't post it in the poetry section because I want to discuss it here.

 

I call it

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Individual Carbon Copies

 

We are very different you and I

As a celebration let's link arms

And deeply sigh

Orginal

Unique

Individual

Does chanting this cliche

Make it permanent or conditional?

I'm original

And so are you

I'm unique

And so are you

I'm an individual

Trust me your one of those too

Different

Yes, we are differnt

But we overlook the fact

We're all exactly the same

We all walk a straight line

To make your own is a great shame

We are all judemental

We're all denying

If there is or was anything exceptional

With our own neglected abilities

There is no trying

Human Beings A.K.A the rat race

Bunched together in crowds

We're all just similar faces

If you want you can ignore

It may just give you some temporary relief

After all you probably

Don't have the same beliefs

Don't let my crazy thoughts

Get to you

Cause when you think on them

They are very mundane

Just another carbon copy

Shared personality, questions and answers with everyone else

We are all exactly the same

 

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What I want to discuss here is why do all people pride themselves on being unique.

The questions that are being asked has been asked before by others before you and will continue to be asked when you are long gone. What you say now and think unique has been thought or said before. Are we thinking the same when we think we are different ? By repeating the mantra over and over I'm not like them I 'm different does it make it true? or more beleivable?

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Blessed   

Great poem!

 

To answer your question, I'd say it doesnt really make it true! Why because, we have come to be our so unique selfs through the imitation of others. as social beings, our identity is dicated by our interaction with those arround us and imitation of our parents, siblings, friends and members of the wider society. this holds true for most people - unless your are extremely eccentric - and in that case your considered - crazey!!

 

outa time - later

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that poem was lovely, and i know that i aint unique, coss i did my quiz, and i answered the same as 98% of the population.

 

well, i guess we unique, there is only 1 me, that looks like me has my name ,and personality, the whole compination of me is unique!

 

but break me down, and im common!

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Pixie nice poem.

 

If one can make sens of his own person and the inconsistence of his actions, the main in this perpetual reminiscence and he doesn't go crazy he would probably know that he is unique !

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