DeadlyVision Posted May 14, 2003 (2ClearDaMisconceptionBetweenSomaliLovers) ... :rolleyes: lets Do this love thing proper... I meet u with sincerity so I can gain ya trust~ Love'ya with every beat of my heart, show u my lust~ Admire ya every step, with love&respect~ Everytime u pass me by I tend 2injure my neck~ Am into ya looks, a sucker for ya' smile... Around u I transform into a amature child... Far away from feelin @home, Still my love is shown but never grown... Its like my throan was over thrown... Am I still ur KING? Are U my QUEEN? Or are we gona play like Westerners &play the multy game, drity far from clean... So it seems... My desires to make u feel higher, Turned me into a lier End up sendin my love like a party flyer~ I mean 2be honest, 4ever stay modest... Simply cause its logic, even u know I work out our love like magic; be the one 2leave feelin static~ Still with thoughts...thinking* "I love you" "I need you" "Dont listen 2what she says" "Honestly, we need 2mutualize this relationship" "Dont force me to lie by doubting my ways" "Love me love you better" "Lets mutualize this love'letter" "Back&Forth it takes 2 to make love" "Takes 2 to build chymistery" "Takes 2 to love, lets make history" "Dont hate me because the female body is part of my battles in this world".... ........ .. I love, I think I love you, I know I love you.... We make mistakes, lets fix 'em 2gether... Please dont kill my rose Somali girl I love you... ..... Generalize my not!.... ..... ~1~ DeadlyVision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fouzia_Bella Posted May 14, 2003 wooooow hey deadlyvison (OZ)...that was extremly nice, i loved it. see that's why iam one of your fans, keep writting 'em, show ppl your talent cuz damn boy u got it! anyways iam out...keep up the positve vibe! ~WUN~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted May 14, 2003 Since we speaking of Love let me type some keystyle....... Everytime u pass me by I tend 2injure my neck Around u I transform into a amature child... OooooooooooH! that is so sweet, describtive shit but anyway...here I go...this is about some dude that had me feeling his poetry like crazy....SKILLS.I hope I did him justice His poetry soothes me Like a sand seduces an ocean Of glistening clear blue water Eases my senses Takes me to paradise His poetry sings to me The way Marvin's voice croons the soul He inspires me and that's what keeps me going He tells a powerful story And leads me on searching for a clue Of what makes him so incredible His poetry holds the answers To the hidden riddles in my heart He speaks to me without a sound And leaves me feeling free and lovely His poetry gives me chills As he wraps me up in his Soulful words and leaves me tangled Never scolded by his words Puts me at ease without missing a beat His Poetry captures my soul Like a thief in the dark night Making my thought his Leaving speechless Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted May 14, 2003 Deadlyvision iyo MsWord ... you r both highly talented ... No wonder Somalia is called the "Land of Poets". Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted May 21, 2003 deadly vision..mmh..'lingering wordz'...luvely jubbly..lol tha heat of the words the rhythm is it a farce? the word luv shines like light leaning on ma thighz chilling blood heavy keys u type big caps matches your big heart am smiling am crying am dying am naturing milk in ma breast warm fo him like he iz in ma nest feeding his heart coz he brings out tha best in me when am in need he iz my 'somalian seed' quenching ma thirst wid hiz 'top breed' pappi stay on a high coz mammi wud alwayz wonna keep u in her arms hugs~ luvs~ kisses~ caresses~ massage~ like u r ma fudge~ like u r ma knight~ in shining armour~ lemmie mummer~ sweet soft words in your earz~ coz baby u got me locked on your a gear~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haseena Posted May 24, 2003 To be loved like that is a blessing.....a very lucky one...wrote this a time of love a time when you and I was the only ones..but distance and silence moved it to the back of our lives... Yearning a feeling one far distant Not knowing him fully reaps my thoughts Stripping every emotion safely lien inside I have a feeling towards a guy One my eyes never met his sight yet my heart ever grasped his mind I can truly say I love him, of all that I am capable to carry he lives in my thoughts Strongly no reason explains why I ever let my innermost carry his trade Inspiring me I’ve never written so much short a time I thought my love was grateful Now I know my love had its own grinding task and a purpose out of reach Thinking of him made my very hardest vitality melt breathless for not knowing what ever came to touch me move me and amuse my heart at his conscience a strength of sadness abused my brain forcing my steam to ask is he doing well or is he somewhere feeling ill or being sad I think he knows not what he in my heart has lit he tells love is what he is having Like Michael Bolton I would say it’s more than love I’m feeling inside Forward I face starness of my future and he is there * I hope* Wanting him to be the very first one to enter my soul wanting ever bliss to enter my world Minds playing him to be my man caring for him a season out of joy a lifetime made of two never felt this presence of a person so far from me inspiringly he is out there beyond a length I live for the moments I gaze in to his spirit The smile it brings can never be erased Eternally they will stay that way Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
