La-y-La Posted October 28, 2002 !A FAILED TRY! Sky so beautiful it hurts my eyes walking just walking see where the road takes us u r so deep and so beautiful i feel like you deserve a crystal heart and my love i cannot give i wish i could give something in return for ur love is so real and your heart so pure a tear rolls down my cheek i turn to hide my pain i hear u slowing ur pace and for one moment i think u r gone i pause and look u r still here i don't know if i hurt u for feelings u don't conceal anymore a failed try u believe a failed try at love!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nuna Posted January 5, 2003 Keep it up Girl, you doing it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted January 9, 2003 My sister! your poem is moving and questioning. But thankx for sharing it with us. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibtisaam Posted January 9, 2003 what a great poem u written there sis...keep it up Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
