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There'll Never Be Another Me...unix, its a poem, don't come in!! lol

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Hibo   

Salaams ppl, well since there isn't a poetry section here...i thought i'd post one of my poems here...some of u might have already read it back in the somalinet forums...but its just the way i'm feeling right now

 

There'll never be another me

Promises broken, chances blown

Bitter tears and feelings thrown

Phony smiles and broken hearts,

Something's tearing us apart

I can't leave, but I can't stay

And I can't believe these games we play

What is it that we did wrong?

Because all the happiness is gone

Before you turn to walk away,

And say those things I know you'll say

Take one good look at what you see

There'll never be another me

Quiet stares and empty words

A cry for love that goes unheard

Painful silence, angry eyes

Emotions that can't be disguised

The laughs and smiles have disappeared

There's no doubt something's missing here

Things are changing, by and by

In ways we can't ask how or why

Confusion's hitting more and more

What exactly are we looking for?

Before you leave and don't come back,

Before you run to where someone else is at

Take one good look at what you see

because there'll never be another me

 

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medman   

i came in anyway,

damn sister, u r bad.

 

p.s i meant that in a good way

 

 

 

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criminal minded,you've been blinded

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Hibo   

IDIL, Nice poem, but i wonder what triggered those words to flow from their home.

 

Once again, Nice poem, Athough it makes me think there is a serious message it conveys.

 

B4N

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Hibo   

idil sis,

 

indeed, there'll never be someone like u.

 

here is a big hag for u (). I hope that helps.

nice poem by the way. peace

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Hibo   

Salaam ppl

 

lol@medman u couldn't keep away huh?

 

Samira thank u sis

 

lol Jamaal....do you usually analyse everythin people say like that?

 

Thank u illamatic that was sweet of u smile.gif

 

lulla sis, as they say time heals all wounds insha allah

 

Ma'Salaama ppl

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Hibo   

Hey Idil where ARE you girl, for sure there will be no another you, I remember you girl, the Smiles that stole my heart. Come back to us IDIL

 

[This message has been edited by JamaaL-11 (edited 02-05-2002).]

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Hibo   

nice pome sis i really liked it....1

 

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I @n$wer whit rhymez,

do they fit ur ?tion.

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Hibo   

Salaam ppl

 

lol Muslimah...ma 6 viva eek.gif lol grazie cara...ci vediamo Domina insha allah

 

Jamaal...i'm still here bro...just been a lil busy

 

Libaax...I love u too aboowe!!!

 

da answer, thx walaal

 

 

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ARAWEELO   

SIS THANKS I COULD NOT COME UP WITH THOSE WORDS WHEN I NEEDED IT. I AM NOT A POET BUT I THINK I COULD USE YOURS IF IT IS OK WITH YOU. cwm25.gifcwm25.gifcwm25.gif

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Kowneyn   

Idil, u make me sad girl...here u go anyways!

 

It was love at first sight

A promised future bright

 

call it destiny, call it faith

It all ended on its appointed date

 

Although, I accept it with out a fight

Tears do fill my pillow at night

 

to rip violently two souls apart

does cause pain and broken heart

 

But! Dont u turn our love to hate

Practice patience-- its great

 

Perhaps when you consider it late

Allaah may yet bestow on us his grace

 

Two souls in conflict yet in Love

can only wait for decision from above

 

Kowneyn

 

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