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sYric-STiPHuLLa

BRing back the beatz

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I can see u guys are at the beginning of your rhyming stages. You actual make lines that all rhyme. Well thats easy, anybody can do that. You learn that reading Dr. Seuss. Even if all your lines ryhme make it unique. All your lines are so predictable dog. I can tell where your going with it before I even read it.

 

Now write a line or six bars that do not rhyme but actual make sense.

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J.Lee   

Okay......well even though the challange isn't directed at me personally ;) ..let me drop it........

 

Boy like "stevie wonder" as a "novelist"

you can't "see" me in a "write off" -

I'm up like "an erect penis" and u'll get "jerked off"-

My name'll be engraved in your mind Due to my amazing rhymes-

After this you gon' be a "silent f*ck" like two "mating mimes"-

you can't win like the US on grungy foreigners I'll beat u like harry boramer

but it doesn't matter...boy you couldn't "write a hot verse" if you "swallowed a lighter"

then started "typing with your fingers on fire"

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