Viewer Discretion
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The way your touch feels against my skin
The way you whisper in my ear
The way you always know what’s on my mind
Always know how to make me smile
When I see you
It’s like the sun peeking through clouds as it rains
Bringing hope for brighter days
And promising much happiness …..
Ever after
Two halves of one heart
A piece for you
And one for me
Together we complete each other
And if ever our love fades away
I know this to be true
Nothing foul can be said about you
Because you’re the perfect gentleman
You put me on a pedestal
I’ll never forget
And remember that
BABY>>>>>
I really did love you!!!!
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Brotha that was one fine piece of work.. I don’t know how anyone could misunderstand that as a one night stand.. IT was EXCELLENT
Stay positive
GOODBYE=Until next time
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Thanks for your replies and feedback...
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Eloquent in his speech
Considerate in his manner
Patient with his temper
Attentive of his tone
The perfect MAN
Sweet when he should be
Protective absolutely
Confident with himself
Conceited about me
Always ready to please
The perfect MAN
At least 6 feet tall
Smells “fresh to deathâ€
Nice Build
And always clean shaven(some exceptions can be made)
And don’t forget his attire
Prada
Gucci
Polo
Who am I kidding?
Clean clothes
Nice colors
That’s all I really need
Someone who truly loves me
Entirely
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I see the light
But haven’t yet won the fight
I might never really be the same
And I truly never liked the game
Had my heart broken once, twice
But never thrice
You learn from your mistakes
You had me in a dream world
So surreal
Thought it was the real deal
Seems I had my eyes wide shut
After all love is blind
And i really didn’t mind
On top of the world
Flying through clouds
Soaring through the wind
You had me on ecstasy
Actually
Words couldn’t do it justice
Things came to an end
When I caught you with what’s her name
I couldn’t see the signs
Of a good thing gone bad
Made me really sad
And maybe a bit mad
Life goes on
I guess
just waiting for time
to pass me by
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I’d be willing to be your wife
And say the vows kinda thing
I’d pamper you
As well as comfort you kinda thing
I’d be your queen
And you’d be my king kinda thing
You’d hold doors
And pull out chairs kinda thing
I’d whisper in your ears
And ease all your fears kinda thing
You’d hold me tight
And always in sight kinda thing
Together forever
For all eternity kinda thing
I like your flow
Please share some mo’
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That was real lovely...Keep up the good work
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I lie
So you wont cry
If i told you
I couldnt call you
Would you try and understand?
If i told you
We couldnt chill
Would you love me still?
If i wanted a break
Wouldnt you cry a lake?
How about.....
If i said i was busy
Would you try and kiss me?
If i told you we were through
Woudnt you send your crew?
How bout
If iw as playing you
Wouldnt you break in 2?
I'm sure instead... Youd like
Me to send you flowers
And talk for hours
For the world to revolve
Around you and me
If you try and understand
That sometimes
I may feel down
And wont be around
Tried to be considerate
I wouldnt need to lie
And there wouldnt be no need to cry
I'll always keep
My promises
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Another day
The rain persists
And I can no longer resist
No one is around
I’m sure I won’t be found
What joy it brings
To see the rain
Water the trees
For them to grow
If you’re lucky
Both you and me
Can catch a glimpse
Of an exquisite thing
(Well it is to me)……
A rainbow
I’d run
And jump
And scream
Aloud
Indefinitely
I’d thank the lord
How gracious is he
To bring such beauties
For both you and me
Allah is truly great!
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Used and abused
Passed down
Like hand me downs
Treated like objects
Livin in the projects
Don’t generalize
Rather comprehend
And recognize
A Woman
Then came you
Bad times
A few crimes
The result
Being called a ***
Is it really her fault?
Mistakes happen
Things should be forgotten
Live life
Quite simple
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Always there to comfort you
Never will forsake you
The end is awfully near
Hell we shall always fear
Be kind
And surely you will find
That Paradise
Lie’s under momma’s feet
Cherish her
Lover her
Respect her
And never let her suffer
Be grateful
Repent
And forgived
You shall be
Hopefully
Mothers always forgive…..
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I liked yours.. it was nice....But i dont relate to it, but nevertheless it was good
A man of such kind
I’m sure is definitely hard to find
You say he made you
“Speechless”
“Breathless”
Emotions at all time high
Most Probably a lie
Take a breath
Realism isn’t far away
No man has such powers
To leave one without breath
And worst of all
Speechless
Incapable to communicate
And Converse
Positively a horror
Words give you supremacy
Security
Wrapped up you seem to be
On this mans ability
Admiration and stability
Let your mind free
“in his presence I flourished, like a beautiful rose”
Sister you are what you perceive yourself to be
With him or without.
Without a doubt.
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How weary I’ve become
Traveled that road many times before
Been there done that
Looked into your eyez……..And
Don’t get me wrong
Definitely Alluring
And certainly ensuring
Saying one thing meaning a next
Dazzled and amused
Compliments abundant
Promises you’ve made
Countless they were
You were my all my everything
High hopes
Led to false hopes
From false hope
went to no hopes
Waited and Waited
True gentlemen
Perceived you to be
Guaranteed me comfort
Call you when I need you
We’d be like glue
Just me and you
Two souls
Making one whole
Pulling chairs
Holding doors
Together we’d be
For now and all eternity
Sadly reality struck
And I went out of luck
Seemed to be
I was the only one in this dream
And everything was going downstream
I liked you
And the same could not be said for you
And now patiently awaited
For the wounds to heal
Its said that time heals all wounds right
Its been a century
The wound still hurts and the scar still there
Is life really FAIR?
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Nuff respect i really liked this poem
Intinerant on nights path...
I seek knowledge between lands.
Days on the road, nights I rest my plans.
From here to there, I wintess the same game.
Lacking plays,what can I say?...its the same game.
Party freaks, thongs & skirts in winter...
Damn!
For me?...Thank you, but what happens after I enter?
Expect me to stay till summer?
Not wit' dat dress code, not wit' dat attitude.
Sorry if I sound rude, but you know the game is ALL GOOD!
Understood?
lol
Intinerant on nights path...
Got nothing but love 4~U.
Trying to be the top dawg!
Open oprotunities door 4~U.
Even though you just another rabbit with a bad habit, got more hops than a frog!
More change than a chameleon, lost in a black fog!
I teach you how to walk the talk!
Than show you how to maintain the walk.
1st dont meet me in the Mosque, tellin' me about a Jam around the Block!
Cause out on the street I knock ya stock!
2nd says you got to be real, let her know u really feel.
That your only out to wet ya lil man makes u feel still solid as a steel.
No long term plans, you holdin'her back from other mens.
She into ya sweet talks, laugh at ya jokes on knock knocks!
And NO, dont fake it around me when u see her species, cause I may break ya front rocks!
Chew how u do, drink ya brew; smoke when ur feelin' blue.
But, Du' kno' wat to do!
3rd dont play; talkin' 'bout Macca will take away my sins.
Just to have a reason to careless around ya pretend friends.
Speak a sinfull bla'bla- "Blah-Bla"
Not knowing faith consensus in senses.
You settin' a bad path for the youngs!
You old and blind folded, learn to read to gain the knowledge cause I wrote it.
5days on a slavery shift.
5ways to repent my sins and notice my gift.
5fingers to complete my palm, so am able to lift.
The book of life.
45 for my right.
25 U good if u see the light.
Now, remain Kool-Kalm-&-Kollective when u fight.
Intinerant on nights Path...
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PROMISE
A word of trust
A lie not just
Dont worry i'm told
"I'm a man of my word"
Lo and behold
As sweet sorrows unfold
Patiently waiting
As my hopes start fading
What words are left to say
"I'm a man of my word"
Surely i'd disagree
Infact i'd second that times THREE
I speak of course as a stranger to this crime
Surely i've never met
A man of this kind
For verily a man is just a man
A human and nothing more
And for that an excuse is ALWAYs at hand
Work
Rest
This
That
Endless possiblities
True to his word
A promise always kept
Are things still foreign to me
Unfortunately
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Very nice if i must say so myself. Its very well laid out
And dont worry i wont quit my day job, although i dont have one.
SistAH
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Wake in your reality
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LOVED IT.. keep up the good work