Supafly Posted October 12, 2003 yea....some quick poem............Dedicated to someone close to me.... I See You Girl, Even Though You Low Key . . . I'm Lonely, And Want You As My One And Only . . . You Mean So Much, But Say So Little . . . A Rock And A Hard Place, With Me In The Middle . . . You Remain A Riddle, So Answer The Mystery . . . All Them Other Niggas, Leave Them As History . . . Im Drowning In Misery, So Give Me This Present . . . Your Hand, In Mine, Now Isnt This Pleasant ? ? I Cant Figure Out Your Brain Though, It Remains So . . . This Pain Yo, Is Driving Me Insane Slow . . . This Chance Wont Pass Me, I Wont Miss It . . . Because I Instantly Light Up When You Visit . . . So Please Just Come And Let Me Hold You Tight . . . Because Ma, Its Gon Be Awfully Cold Tonight . . . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Resonance Posted October 12, 2003 let her see u with the sounds u introduce make her hear u with the words u produce it'll get her attention which won't deviate to those u can't and the rest who won't tell it like it is, uncensored and raw so pass her a scrap of paper folded in 4 around your thoughts, your heart- your rhythm and halt her at your door. good luck rez Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted October 12, 2003 I seen you crossing words... Silent speaking from ur eyes, my vision heard You cry out for love But couldn't get ya jealous frieds from being stuck on the back of your mind You would be mine, i would be your thug Pullin & pushin, hugs we get by usin' fisty tug Seen you comfortable with him Heard u believe i tried to kiss another skin I bother not to win this tainted mind spin Seen u been thinkin' of ways to let me know so- how so you kept quite with no signs to show. You wanted out, cause i wasn't the type to go south. Heard you yawn, seen me go beyond ghost Seen you girl trying to get the most Digging Golds So seen you to the door..."Go walk with them other dumb goats" Am dont with this lying jokes... See you choke, tried to smoke seen you cry on your 1st toke I see you faking it girl.. I see you~ So seeya~ ~1~ Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Supafly Posted October 14, 2003 WOW resonance.............Respect...lol U Wordperfect let me put it like that..lol And Vision Deadly Poet ..i like the style u developed in yo poetry's But....let me tell yall somethin..... Quietly outflows the elixir of my lungs Invincibly floating, imaginarily hung Another syllable, word, lyric not sung Resting the world’s open mind Closing more than myself, blind Resonance Lead me astray, what may I find? Nesting into coiled breeding grounds Calmly, strongly, my restless heart pounds Because the noise from my dreamwomen lips resounds Feather kisses upon my cheek The nameless wonder I dare not speak To caress me dearly, leave me weak This is your thunder, in my skies Your pleading, begging wake up cries To miss deception, but realize… Dawg DeadlyVision I’m merely sleeping Wake up in pain or More so dreaming The things awake I don’t admit to thinking… Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
