DeadlyVision Posted July 8, 2003 Sending my middle fingers in a pile~ Jokes on title~ Where is my iddle? Fit-in my shoes~An walk a mile! Expressin far from impressin so keep ya smile_ Hate me love you not, all in a while_ You play ****** like a lil child* I prepare ya' profile~ DUMP DIM NUM HUM wanna be PLUM wanna be CHUM wanna be da ONE HuH son? .... Callin out, yellin out; Those who be sellin out. Sellin us out 2da beast in this faithless heat. .... Livin in steam I speak like a Freak Easy going 4sake of culture: I kiss ya Cheek! at the same time ama: Call~out all the -Be.eye.tea.see.edge.e.s... All I can say is: Be ya real'self, simply u can't be like I is~ Cause am somethin DIFFERENT; cool for now, but heat me up an' watch me cuss like an INGORANT. Like Rosco, HotDamn u wont be able to read between my LINES But I'll donate you my rhymes_so u can get ya time Shine... Ex-cut clean, now nappy an' lookin Mean Phac'ya mean am not how I Seem* I change like da 4 Seasons 4 da reasons I try 2 Redeem. Myself shift up my Wealth 4every famale dat hates me an loves da lil mAn under ma Belt 4sickness ~ 4Health 4da way you bellow with anger: 4da way u Dwelt... Hate: 4 what I Felt... 4 you are da reason I Jilt... 4every moment u try 2Melt... :mad: My cheese, baby girl please_ Love is less talk an more action* with ease. :cool: 4da sake of your tease* 4da way you heat me up; 4da jokez in da way u act up. 4da hee hee & haa haas, 4da fake laughs. 4me gettin 2-hardcore? 4u askin what for? 4 da love of 2003 giving birth 2 2004... 4da sake of change, I shift! Spark a spliff! Blaze a blunt & knoc' ya mAns fronts_ Sober not drunk Gansta not a punk sexy I hunt 4da..... Adress that last line if ur mind is not hum_ Somethin like a moryaan wit' a gun_ Freestyle strange only as a writer on this page_ Hate stress I lay 2rest Str8 vest I play my best Strap 2caps on my rib'chest Footsolja walk You bulldozer talk Talk more than you are And walk less than you are Weaker than 7days new born baby A punk with tears when ur lonely Develope a world of balls when u get company ur record is all so soo shady C'mon Mr.Lady Be a mAn on ya own Cause dealin wit' me will get ya Throne over thrown, my f*cky talk is shown To make you feel drone Ur fake like your drawn :eek: Lackin faith plus pateince ur bound 2 drown... Jam from boredom, still I yawn 4Ayan All I ask is 4u funny niggas 2be real & chill after am gone.... Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Jus'let'me'know'if'u'hate'me Dont'be'nice'an'try'2stap'my'back_ Am'2grown'4ya'basics- I'murder'guns'kill'jus'face'it_ Hate me 4 da sake of love an see me careless: :rolleyes: ~1~ PME Vision (Its Like I Got Foes 4 Friends, Chums 4 Rivals) getsomesleepson lol ~1~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 8, 2003 SALAAM DEADLYVISION YOU HAVE GOT MAD SKILLS. WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY. KEEP IT UP BRO. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LuCkY Posted July 8, 2003 OOOOOPPPSSS!!! :rolleyes: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted July 8, 2003 lol... Nice Flow,Al'through out.. Damn..It was blow after Blow, Can you burn a Mic'.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted July 9, 2003 Inspire me to bla'bla some more_thnx peepz! ... Wasalaama MsLucky_ Hows it hangin? my Instinct buddy_ I rate u high in this Poetry_ Check it... Far from poems I demolish domes_ Take ma foes like loans_ Build ya senses like Villa homes_ Thankin you all for ya love is shown_ am flown_flowin~floadin~as if am boatin~ Lost in a misty world, my mind roams :rolleyes: Known asa drifter, so am in an out of many towns_ Lovin' da way I get beef from clowns...lol Love the love I recieve from my moms_ Sistas, brothas an all those who wanna exchange pounds_ I respect u back with lot of bounds~ Flippin frowns* Am all rhymez, motivating minds feelin soo fine Time 2get cocky, maa don' slap me, Jus' give me my rate~ I feel supressed from my 5mics, now am jade! And here is where I staid, talkin' 'bout~~~ I should get paid~ Hate me or not, but ma game gets me laid~ Sweet hearts get sensual I get metual_ And I love you is what they said~ I love you too; but u I shouldn't plaid~ Changin 4da better, sweety accept my love-letter am flowin like chetter, switch ma anger like bad weather~ I tell u 'bout my Bewilderment~Beef* an u say: whatever Measure me from my past, accept my presence Keep an eye out for my future: Am all 'bout u like nature, I'll promise not fade ya: Emtion for my love'sista: Promotion for my steel'brotha: I feel brotha! I reel brotha! 4A real brotha! Sistas livin in major* Pain Stress Mess in brain Shame feelin less How lame~ livin became another game :eek: Lost culture, cross'd religion lecture... Ignored ma scholar Now am left lost wearin a blue collar Slavin' for da one dat hates my color :confused: ... When I speak of Bewilderment~Beef: I mean uknown confussed hatret, and greef... Hope y'all understand why I speak of soo many topics in one~ Doing this 4fun... Perfect read an add a beat~ An feel da tone sound soo sweeeeet... I mean really read, an halla at me if u need any answers u may seek_ About my rhyming in sleek... Am verbally hungery, feelin untterancly weak_ Hope u share ya' Bewilderment~Beef* ... ~1~ PME Deadly (Its Like I Got Foes 4 Friends, Chums 4 rivals) ~1~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Changed Posted July 9, 2003 Originally posted by DeadlyVision: Adress that last line if ur mind is not hum_ Somethin like a moryaan wit' a gun_ Good one .. oo kalay ileen somali ba aheed.... :confused: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted July 9, 2003 vision. am floored az usual..deep-cut thru rhymes..makin veins bleed with its density..keep it coming.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Batuulo Posted July 9, 2003 looooooooool @ mizz-unique barasho wanaagsan yaah! Anywayz nice N' hot pieces Deadly.. I Always Like your poems, keep it up bro, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silent-sistah Posted July 10, 2003 haye....deadly...now that ur an expert love, will u please give ur biggest fan (moi) some tips in wrting poetry? dont worry- i wont stop loving ya flow when im famous! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
