ayaan_cadeey Posted April 15, 2003 EVERY TIME I SEE YOU,I WANT U MORE AND MORE.EVERY TIME YOU SAY,"HI"TO ME,MY HEART BEGINS TO SOAR.EVRYTIME U TOUCH ME,I PINCH MYSELF TO SEE IF I'M AWAKE.EVERY TIME U LOOK INTO MY EYES,IT'S MY HEART YOU BEING TO TAKE.EVERYTIME I SEE U SMILE,I WISH THAT IT WAS ME.EVERYTIME I HEAR UR VOICE I REGRET THAT I HEAR WE JUST COULD NOT BE.FOR THE TRUTH IS...SHE LIKES U SO,I MUST TAKE A SEAT. FOR SHE HAS FEELINGS DEEPER THAN MINE COULD NEVER BEAT.FOR SINCE WE ARE GOOD FRIENDS,I COULD NEVER TAKE U AWAY. SO,I WILL LOOK AT U WITH A TEAR IN MY EYE HOPIN FOR THE DAY...WHEN I CAN HOLD U BY MY SIDE,AND MY DEEPEST FEELINGS I WONT HAVE TO HIDE. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SuNsHyNe Posted April 16, 2003 Ahhhhhhhh that is sooo beautiful!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lovely me Posted April 17, 2003 that is so wonderful... fast i would like to say wellcomeing , i like the peotry . you know what they say, Real love stories never have an ending. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ayaan_cadeey Posted April 17, 2003 first i will like to say thanxs to everyone who reply.and am glad yall like the poem.there is more where that came from...so plz show some love and check it out...i will love to hear what yall think. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mahdi- Posted April 17, 2003 The peom is beautiful and charming. It's wondeful piece of work. Certainly, it touched deeply into my heart. Simply scintillating though. Ayaan Cadeey, keep it up sis..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProudSista Posted April 25, 2003 Ayaan-cadee, nice one sis it's really touching it made me cry! :rolleyes: I hope it's not you in the poem macantoo, i must say your going trough HELL if so. Anyawz much love! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
