DeadlyVision Posted March 19, 2003 Ma'Nomdic Expressionz~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 20, 2003 I'm feeling that prophecy vibe...let a brotha get his!!! In my future I can see the past repeating. A time when people only come out in the evening. A time when "F*ck you" is a greeting, you only win by cheating. little kids isn't eating, and the smog stops your breathin'. ...I'm sleeping with one eye closed, still in all my clothes, just in case somebody knows or doubts about the path that I chose, isn't so simple as I post But no - I'm still strugglin'. i'm not at home I got to use some judgement. ...little kids who need to be on punishment, can't- 'cauze parents will get vice-verse so kids continue curse at old women for the fun of it. Hard for me to stomach it. ever since my home plummeted, things changed so fast, where is government!!". nobody runnin' it. Someone shot a gun, too bad his brother got in front of it. The future just arrived, but it's too bad no one wanted it. Too late to abort it 'cause our views are distorted. I brought a camcorder to record it..... ---The future here now, keep your doors locked... .....My poetry possessions make an impression, Leave you thinkin n'stressin, take your mind into session, .... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 20, 2003 Deadly Vision,I kinda felt that , gotta be honest, I was walking in your shoes for a minute.step by step, nicely done, from the head to page kept it real, from the start to the end. Good, One........... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarGazer Posted March 27, 2003 There's definitely talent in the house!!! I can't wait to hear some more guys.....keep 'em rolling. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akademik Posted March 28, 2003 ABC--stats..... I guess i can consider my self an artist but who cares?i write whats in my mind for the modest showing kindness, like mildness man caring for the forest i run through life's hardest and violence And express it in honest thats the thing that makes me diffrent than ya'll is those who kept silence approach life difrent than mine is i'm weerin out with sirens can't be defined in science zero to minus- is what my line is I can relate to what you consider finest see i can get cold at times :mad: like million hungary hyenas leave you clueless running around in arenas figure i'm the cleanest is like meeting two ninas finding who'z the meanest this is how that kinda is lets form aliance call me ya highness never say sun ain't this put my boot so far N' tear ya anus believe me when i say semen in me can fertilized all of chinas sike,thats not a promise to be continuw Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 30, 2003 My nomadic expressions.. ha ha this post might be late but today i could not awake not fake, but in a lost state i often shake at the thought of what life will be like one day when i might lose my life or have a wife might she be somali? white?Black? Asian? my minds racin, all these thoughts and the waitin and contemplatin, i need some hard help with the cards dealt though friends listen, the problems are far from felt hard to tell and even harder to find someone to listen someone else wishin for a mission a cause to applaud I’d pull a pause outta my pocket and place it on the faces of the clanist to stop their hatred on the basis original origin and the color of their faces its tasteless how some treat others while some just wanna keep cover cause they know if they show themselves they might lose their life or somethin else we need to help this cause on day its gotta be dealt with One day..................... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted March 31, 2003 Oh wow.... Instinct Poet Deadly Vision n' all others i forgot to mention...i'm honored to be at ur presence...(or so)... herez a lil somethang i wrote while in Calc class...bored outta ma mind... its not great..nor is it finished...but i know its expresses ma tru feelings... exem exem War seems i can't escape from it its knocking at ma door War a legal killing spree where da criminals run free War a raging beast in da middle east and in Somalian streets War whether for money or oil its inevitable turmoil War Weapons And Rage War lb of greed 2 spoonfulls of fear a touch of "all you can be" optional: civilians to be freed War created by Evil practiced by man .......tell me wat'cha yall think...spare ma feelings tho aight..lol peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted March 31, 2003 Benovelent_Beauty....... Thats what i'm talking about... WhOa, W.A.R.... One...let me see more...... express ya mind..BENOVELENT, BEAUTY i like the cent of it try you thoughts to never let dry rust for permanent exercise to ever get the word play for the fun of it.... nice piece....... .................NOMADIC EXPRESSIONZ.................. If ya can't express ya self, than what you livin' for? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted March 31, 2003 Ma mother cries She says don’t do that. I tell lies about where I be at In the mosque, she envisions her daughter on a prayer mat But really she at the mall runnin’ around wit different hoodrats I mean…I luv ma mom…I’ll say it out loud It’s just that She’s in a different crowd… livin’ unda a different cloud Her mother cries Becuz confusionz hijacked Her mind and slaughter her heart Her daughters out all hours of da nite “its just a wedding’.. u told me its alright” truth be told, it was really Prom Nite “I couldn’t tell her…that would start a fight…not to mention she’ll neva let me outta her sight” Weeks pass, she’s pregnant, gains a lil weight Her energy is gone, She's loosin’ her shape, no more a bangin' figure eight Who woulda guessed it, It was just a blind date “he told me he luved me..that I was his soul mate” mother doesn’t get it cuz back home weight was sign of good fate until her daughter begins to throw up every plate tiresome one every date “The Shame u brought to this house” mom first thought is not abort now nor the courthouse “No! we shall save the family name and make him your lawfully wedded spouse” so she sits there contemplatin’ constantly debatin’… rarely negating she can end a life that can possible make hers extremely elating on the otha hand marry a fool who is extremely degrading thoughts of suicide are invading her mind as she wonders thru life without a soul for aiding...... TO BE CONTINUED...gotta hit da books now..but "I WILL BE BAK"...see watchu' done did Instinct Poet..lol..u know ur encouragement is at fault if this poem isn't published...riite" until then... Salaamu Caleykum Waraxmatu"llaahi Wa' Barakaat Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haseena Posted March 31, 2003 Hi it's my first time posting in here- and I must tell you folks you are very good with what you do. A dear friend of mine told me to visit this site- and now I don't wanna leave it. I wrote this poem today/tonight and wanted to share it with you, I didn't want to start on with a posting of my own- you all seem to like it in here so I'll keep it right here. PS. Hjärtat sorry, but this doesn't change any of my feelings it rather sorts it out, read it twice and see your meaning in it. ------------------------------------------------- It’s been a while since I used my pen To express my thoughts One may say it’s due to feelings being oppressed I’ll say it’s due to life keeping me fixed I ended a love story who never should’ve began A tale doomed to ever exist My heart it called pain for not knowing It showed my praying that little was to be changed Amazing how little one may be no power to heal a bleeding soul To uplift a grieving mind A young soul on a road a journey is taken upon Life enters and a bliss is beyond Awaiting is trials of seduction round the block sin is preparing No where is a land to be made than what Allah has approved Yet I fail not to amuse Iblis Strangely how I felt for two, yet a heart is placed for one Covering the conscience with jokes to foretell a ruling made for me Deeply I knew that wrong was made To have it was not for me If its to ask what are your dream I strongly would say God guide me With pleasant visions enlisted yet a darkness pollutes the air Coldness inside grasps my blood, grapping my thoughts Firmly I turn to my stare ------------------------------------------------- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted April 1, 2003 Oh My god..is funny sometimes,to find people you can relate with, Their words just exquisite,see past the explicit look close to the moral of the story..... Haseena, nice one, don't it feel good after you've written and expressed ya self.? I wish every one who visited could read the words of benovelent_beauty,Girl you hit the X mark many WILL relate, without a doubt..Thats only if they read and understood, metaphorz I wish that everyone could read between the lines You could post 100 times, and still get no replies Keep your pride, walk with your head held high Only time will tell the truth between the lies If you write for other minds, it's guaranteed you'll resign Or redesign your rhymes to climb Up the SomaliaOnline, ladder of success, don't stress over text Make sure you balance writtens with real express from the reality tests Appreciate good feedback, to earn respect, give respect Don't neglect eclectic sources of superb word play Hunger for Knowledge, and be careful about what you say Manifest word play everyday without delay Remember your just a voice, but simply avoid overused cliches and similies Always be yourself, and value your own identity Write relentlessly, placing emphasis on placement Develop some tough skin, and always stay patient ......Thank You Very much for that Piece benovelent, I took those words for granted... Haseena, welcome to the site as well, please write some more of your pottent pen..lol.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Haseena Posted April 2, 2003 Thank u Instinct-poet deadly vision- nice one Here's one unfinished....can't write on it no more, wanna share it with y'll folks war got man blinded building up late mirrors crashing houses for multiple reasons war is to prevent happenings stop tyranny from conquering world democracy my mind got me thinking Saddam is he really a bully when come to view it bush is the real killer I take it back democracy meaning western globosity Who ever gave a black man a cause A Hindi a voice An Indian a mind to get sharing from the past Got nuclear to save the day When all it brings is more hate to the world Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted April 2, 2003 Deadly Vision...aboowe/abaayo...that last one spoke to me. :eek: :eek: .lol...it MADE me wanna write ***grapin' a pen ..runnin' fo da exit*** BB has left da buildin' ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akademik Posted April 5, 2003 Aigh't this is kinda tight.I love the fact i can put my self in in your point of view even though some of ya lost me. Benovelent Beauty....I love you girl.. I don't think i blinked once for that poetry that you wrote, Instinct..I'm in ya shoes, i see what you see. Deadly Vision,,I can relate with you, cauze i know most of what you talk about. Honesita, same with you, I can walk in ya shoes... feel me,"skin deep" If i spoke the truth, some of ya would dismiss me without asking, why,how and what but is life today that insists on that, See, my mental is corrupted by tha things I cannot see, ... Dang, to be continued tommorow,,Emergency runnNNN Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
