poetic_brothaa

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  1. Yo this is a prominent question that we find amongst our people at this moment in time, as people desperately search to claim a piece of history. I want you guys to share this poem with me and any feedback is welcome (SO LONG AS IT IS POSITIVE). The Promiseland Our quest goes forever on To indicate right from wrong Thus figure out how we came to be born How our society came to be torn Inner goal to on our own two feet stand One day reach the promiseland This much talked about place N how I never met its face Yet deep down I feel a link Maybe it’s because its my motherland Surely it’s a normal thing Some portrait its benefits and qualities Others have forgotten its natural remedies I was once told To grow up there was like no other Where my only answer was damn I wasn't there Yet my life was fair I never forgot about my peoples But remained always aware Raised n based on my history The facts simply laid bare How could I ever stop to care My personal mission If God says so To 1 day get there In this place families value historical roots Like we over here Know the source of our suits The young and old share knowledge In exchange of practicality Makes up an era which currently unfolds We gotta explore n persue What the future for us holds There's that 1 place like no other land One day we shall reach the promiseland Peace
  2. to a lost friend, you should not forget but always remember, those not seen often, still remain dear, I hope u keep me close & forever near, promise 2 defuse all your fears, nor will I let u shed any tears, as far back as my memory takes me, I recognised a special thing in u, your might n wisdom will shine u through, keep ur head up n never give up, the only way forward, is to make ur way up, I’m here 2 help u in any way, any time n any day, don’t hesitate to ruin my day, to ensure happy u stay, stay real, live life without fear, maintain ur mind clear, keep me close to your heart and forever near. P.S. We must remember that it is a blessing to come across this type of a friend, and so we should cherish every last minute. As time gives us no indication of when the ending will come forth.
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    Love?

    True sista You spoke your mind Reality shows That love is blind Your heart drowns In feelings so fine By GOD I hope May your angel in disguise Rescue you in time Fulfill your dreams Meet all your needs Destiny awaits us all Have faith Listen carefully for its call............. .......................................... Sis this is just a word of advice from a dear brotha, feel free to comment 1Luv
  4. I am 23 - Part 2 .... Will I ever be That guy Everyone wants me to be Will I ever have The soul Of an innocent being Will I ever succeed In life And all its complexities Something only God can reveal Therefore the truth is consealed In this mirage Before me I see In good time The real me shall unveil ps. feel free to reply with comments you may have Ahmed Da_Lost_Nomad Copyright ©2003 Ahmed Da_Lost_Nomad
  5. I am 23 - Part 1 Now that am 23 Am not yet free Confused as hell Tomorrow where will I be As eternity looms Prosperity furthers How am I to know Whats ahead of me But to live life Through this Endless battle strive to be cont.........