alexus_orjustice Posted April 16, 2003 Mortal_4Ever 2 b with u, is 2 breathe, 2 breathe, is 1 breathe closer to my mortality, Id rather live a mortal life with u, Than b immortal 4ever without u, As the seasons change, And the hands of time tick-n-tock, I will wait 4ver and a day, 2 see u once more... alexus_orjustice Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 16, 2003 Emortal 4ever~ am feelin this still... ... .... Honesty, Modesty, all part of my reality~ You make me feel complete~ Feelin' hard, I feel like I can walk through dry concrete~ In reality, I love you~ Artificially, I contemplate Y-I-Love-U~ But, u seem 2b like an onion~ After every peel, U got another layer waitin 4me~ When will I get 2know u? Why can't u open up? How come I love you? Lets discuse love.... Am confused with u lost with out u... even I can't believe this seems soo true~... ... WuN'Tu...Peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ayaan_cadeey Posted April 16, 2003 am feelin both of yall poems..mad love to yall keep up the good work. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted April 17, 2003 Modesty ,And honesty, Can't relate reality this is how sad i be anger inside of me burning like calorie girls check my salary next she wants to be part of me, see, this bathers me i just rather be like"Kabba lather"see ..my Bizz,keep ya way out of it unless ya wanna be another anatomy Pause''' My Granpa noted me once listen close cuz' this really makes a "sense" look like "mess"-- Granpa-->....Son, In the "West" don't trust the triple "W" Woman Weather And White people, Shhh i didn't ask you to mock it Silence, keep ya hands in ya pocket. Keep it to yo self, who wants to hear what you though of it.. I'm just poet, words make me heroic and ya know it. this ain't the end of the road, I rode it... "I wrote it". peace.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
