Twisted Posted April 7, 2003 Pain and sorrow felt in our generations past Proud as a nation our forefathers died Proud of them we shall remain Truth be told The nation of today is falling apart The reason why I shall tell If you're wise enough to listen Our ignorance in the past Became the TRIBES of today Keep the ignorance among us We should/shall no longer accept Educate our next Is a must for the future Fail on that and the nation once so proud Will come to its end Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 8, 2003 Just a Vision~>After slaver shift, I wrote this~ Twisted that was more than just a vision... Its a blue print to a greater mission... One we should've, could've attain- Now we half lost, fully feelin da pain- Of tribalism, the same issues of our 4Fatherz... Why bother? Educate ya' self and maintain ya' health... U know, I know, we know education is da 1st step to real wealth...And our inner desires-> Plus our hearts faith is our main stealth... 10years of age in 1990 I ran from an escalating civil war~ Came to a Foriegn land with a scar~ came real far. With nothing but just a vision- Our parents had 2get us out from da bloody depression~ War agression inflicting the world 2day... Pass generations, present generations, waiting to see what the future generation brings... Or comes with... Evil, Deceivably we all are equally falling down hard... Some play smart, some are smart, & some are plain num at heart... I say shuffle again to the dealer, I think you delt me the wrong hand... How can it be? am always plottin da wrong plan? Am I becoming the wrong man to hold a males stand? No, its been writen for me 2be like this- I like this... Even though I may hate it, I love it~ for its life, my life.... Ups and downs, smiles and frowns, all around~ I hear the sound~...The call for prayers~ Just a vision-->I listen, but I let my evil stand in all of my four courners~ Far gone, speaking for most, I think I lost my culture~ Since they can't hit me, parents can only give me a lecture~ Sector by sector I hear them but don't listen... Just another vision, I keep on wishing... With issues of my own, am grown but still got that permanent frown ... Sad from the past, struggles at present, worries in my future? Bad Luck--could it be part of my nature? I pray 2, 4, 4, 3, 4, a day~ Still missing something, but feeling real good~ I feel life, start to eat my food~ Feel better, times passes~ The fog comes bck to me imaginary glasses~ TV, don't see me~ Radio, same old scenario~ War on this war on that~ I wonder when will peace come back- Anyways...ama hold it down with faith~ And just hope Allah takes me from here to there and to a better place~ Look at my face, than look at yours, created the same, but one of us plays a game~ .... Have faith, Feed on knowledge, and just live your life~...Only Allah can be the judge of you at the End.... Peace&Lovin~ DeadlyVision~....Hope u get it, I wrote this quick~time... WuN~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted April 9, 2003 Nice One ..TWISTED.. Dealy Vision... Deadly Vission.. Now we half lost, fully feelin da pain- Of tribalism, the same issues of our 4Fatherz... Damn don't i feel you on that....... Is kinda nice the way you put it, melody. Heart written... 10years of age in 1990 I ran from an escalating civil war~ Came to a Foriegn land with a scar~ came real far. With nothing but just a vision- Our parents had 2get us out from da bloody depression~ War agression inflicting the world 2day... Pass generations, present generations, waiting to see what the future generation brings... Or comes with... Evil, Deceivably we all are equally falling down hard... Some play smart, some are smart, & some are plain num at heart... I say shuffle again to the dealer, I think you delt me the wrong hand... How can it be? am always plottin da wrong plan? Am I becoming the wrong man to hold a males stand? I'ma vote for you as the POET of the month. Admin or Moderators ya'll hear me right.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Twisted Posted April 9, 2003 Gotta hand it to ya.. great continue.. ,, I agree with Instinc about the forefathers issue thing.. they had it nicely with tribes while we miss understood it Its like they say Ignorance is a deadly weapon __________________________________________________ At our forefathers time TRIBES were used to recognize ppl by far So no one would be a stranger at your house... Lately,people lost the trust in brotherhood at distance and choice to nerrow it with tribe section... Anyway .. Great job bro keep up ... *Twisted* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Twisted Posted April 10, 2003 Here's some I wrote long time ago... __________________________________ Hey Mr white guese what I'm not like you at all Cause I put my trust higher up The one and only god above this earth My mom did not raise no fool So go to hell if you please Cause I have other plans you see Five times a day I pray Just to get away from you Each time I forget all the pain you posses So you see mr white am not like you at all Your a slave to fashion so weak I'm a prince with nobel teach Thanks to allah the mightys speech Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 10, 2003 Lovin' it am holdin it tight~ Man your only drivin me to write more~ Not knowin if I make sense or not, I pick words from da floor~ Spit shine them, rhyme them, line them brand NEW~ Who eva' knew?--I knew cats like YOU?.. Oooh is TRUE...Mr.... Instinct- I might know u personally from ya' nick name--->Now lets shine da LIGHT~ Solja I can see ur real bright~ Historically I think u wrote alot~ Back to this spot~ Lovin ya' hip-hop...Dont STOP~ rise 2da TOP KID~.. Get Twisted with out Alcohole~ Am all this, can't say am all that or ama fall~ Tall, long neck, skinny built this is how I FELT~ ....... .. Here GOES~ I write long lines~ basic rhymes~ To fill up the blank spots in my mind~ ...check it~ Am lost with out map in somewhere far from HOME~ Hang around my peeps in different streets~ Skin & Bones holdin da chrome~ 2stay on my feet~ Cause I see my own kind double crossin me~ Tossin me to the beast, another set up~ Not speakin about my selft, mostly speakin for my bros, behind bars~ wishin upon the starts, I safe a prayer for the ones I lost while riding in thier cars~ Rest and Peace~ Hope now your at ease~ Allah Please 4give them for I've sinned more~ Forgive me for am a sinner, feelin sore~ In my chest, in my brain I feel more than pain~ Heartaches, no breakes, workin 4 cakes thats half baked~ Fallin behind on prayers, frozen by the TV~ Watchin CNN...in a rich land but too broke for Aljazeera~ I can't debate, some may relate, some will mistake~ My metaphores, with different chores~ Like when I say, Am Somali- you can tell by my forhead~ ...jokez on tittle, am something like an idole with out the fame, this aint a game_hope I made sense through what I've said~... ...... ... thnx ya'all~... Someone be the critic and tell me what I should do different with my words~... ... Judge me right, judge me wrong, still I'll take that judgement as a good judgement~... ... One'lovin'1'livin'short'lastin-Stay up peepz~... WUN! Goin out Moryaan Style..Peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Twisted Posted April 10, 2003 Deadly Vision>>this aint a game_hope I made sense through what I've said~... ---------------------------------------- I'll leave the judgement to someone else cause wether you made sence or not You stil breaking them bricks The way I see it there aint no stoping it A deadly vision with basic rythm Just one of us trying express his mission Go ahead share yours couse here come's mine My name is Twisted And no it aint for the fun of it Cause I see my people in confusion but I dare not to ask the reason We all found a new word lonely since we'r in neverland lyricly It's time for our hearts to walk home early and our minds to stay put and educate quickly Education is the only option if we wanna burn down the flag of rabalism Socialism,Feminism or any other ISM is against our tradition. We need the present generation to move from vision to action and no more depression but to lecture our future generation to stand against opression Eh lets face it we'r not stupid so hell yea we know we aint getting help from non. unless we stand as one One is the key to obvious success and advance Lets united only when one and one we stand strong One + One dont simply make two unless you truely believe it so True religion without any reason to doubt we are handed Lets not waste it cause in time we'll all stand and face it We are blessed with such a country that the world envy The US made up a plane to take over our country Thank allah who made there planes go madly It's not things I imagine daily they even made a movie That I call Black Hawk B**chy Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
