Benevolent_ Beauty
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Oh wow....
Instinct Poet
Deadly Vision
n' all others
i forgot to mention...i'm honored to be at ur presence...(or so)...
herez a lil somethang i wrote while in Calc class...bored outta ma mind...
its not great..nor is it finished...but i know its expresses ma tru feelings...
exem exem
War
seems i can't escape from it
its knocking at ma door
War
a legal killing spree
where da criminals run free
War
a raging beast
in da middle east and in Somalian streets
War
whether for money or oil
its inevitable turmoil
War
Weapons And Rage
War
lb of greed
2 spoonfulls of fear
a touch of "all you can be"
optional: civilians to be freed
War
created by Evil
practiced by man
.......tell me wat'cha yall think...spare ma feelings tho aight..lol
peace
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Hey Portrait....
thanx bro/sis...u don't know how much ur positive feedback means to me (i'm sorta of a inspiring poet...lol)..not that i don't wlcm negative feedback...cuz i do..
..infact i wlcm ANY feedback..i'm actually workin' on anotha poem...well again....Tanagu vermacho..lol...
p.s. are u also an inspiring poet?? or just an admirer..
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I Wrote Lies Before
I’ve wrote poems before
Wrote lies before
About how
I have family I adore and Friends to care for
About places I explored and people I fell for
People I die for
Places I cry for
I wrote lies before
About things I stood for and issues I spoke for
About the gruesome civil war and how I witnessed men slaughtered in my front door, corps in the back door
Neva seen an Ak44
I wrote lies before
Neva found what I was looking for
Neva opened a door
Didn’t care about the score
Or who won the war
I wrote lies before
But fortunately...
I took a sec to see
How easy different life could be
If we all told the truth
Instead of writing lies like me
Nomads...Expression
in General
Posted
Ma mother cries
She says don’t do that.
I tell lies about where I be at
In the mosque, she envisions her daughter on a prayer mat
But really
she at the mall
runnin’ around wit different hoodrats
I mean…I luv ma mom…I’ll say it out loud
It’s just that
She’s in a different crowd…
livin’ unda a different cloud
Her mother cries
Becuz confusionz hijacked
Her mind and slaughter her heart
Her daughters out all hours of da nite
“its just a wedding’.. u told me its alright”
truth be told, it was really Prom Nite
“I couldn’t tell her…that would start a fight…not to mention she’ll neva let me outta her sight”
Weeks pass, she’s pregnant, gains a lil weight
Her energy is gone,
She's loosin’ her shape,
no more a bangin' figure eight
Who woulda guessed it, It was just a blind date
“he told me he luved me..that I was his soul mate”
mother doesn’t get it
cuz back home weight
was sign of good fate
until her daughter begins to throw up every plate
tiresome one every date
“The Shame u brought to this house”
mom first thought is not abort now
nor the courthouse
“No!
we shall save the family name and make him your lawfully wedded spouse”
so she sits there contemplatin’
constantly debatin’…
rarely negating
she can end a life that can possible make hers extremely elating
on the otha hand
marry a fool who is extremely degrading
thoughts of suicide are invading
her mind
as she wonders thru life without a soul for aiding......
TO BE CONTINUED...gotta hit da books now..but "I WILL BE BAK"...see watchu' done did Instinct Poet..lol..u know ur encouragement is at fault if this poem isn't published...riite"
until then...
Salaamu Caleykum Waraxmatu"llaahi Wa' Barakaat