Benevolent_ Beauty Posted March 7, 2003 I Wrote Lies Before I’ve wrote poems before Wrote lies before About how I have family I adore and Friends to care for About places I explored and people I fell for People I die for Places I cry for I wrote lies before About things I stood for and issues I spoke for About the gruesome civil war and how I witnessed men slaughtered in my front door, corps in the back door Neva seen an Ak44 I wrote lies before Neva found what I was looking for Neva opened a door Didn’t care about the score Or who won the war I wrote lies before But fortunately... I took a sec to see How easy different life could be If we all told the truth Instead of writing lies like me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PortraiT of a BrokeN SouL Posted March 11, 2003 Wow! Great poem, Sis! Especially this part: But fortunately... I took a sec to see How easy different life could be If we all told the truth Instead of writing lies like me That's true and touching... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted March 12, 2003 Hey Portrait.... thanx bro/sis...u don't know how much ur positive feedback means to me (i'm sorta of a inspiring poet...lol)..not that i don't wlcm negative feedback...cuz i do.. ..infact i wlcm ANY feedback..i'm actually workin' on anotha poem... well again....Tanagu vermacho..lol... p.s. are u also an inspiring poet?? or just an admirer.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
