Me and E's!

[Cindrella]

I would describle myself has a Egotism person.

I'm very Effervecent person.

I Enjoy life to the fullest.

Everything i do is Effortless.You can say say that i'm Elusive when it comes to love!

I also,believe that everyone should have the same rights and opportunities.So that makes me Egalitarian person!

I cant stand a Effeminate men whatsoever!

I Embody what the quality of a Muslim woman should be and Embrace for it!

Im part of a Elite clique!(Sisters for Jihad)

My sucess has Eluded me so far!

I sometime can be very sly Elusive person.

The word Emaciated make me sick to my stomach.Once in a while have some food for Allah sake.

My wonderful smell can be Emanate from a distance.I gave an Eloquent speech into whatever i'm feeling on that day.

BTW...I dont Engage in childlish act.

One day i want to be Empress of a nation.Even if it has to be my cell.

My soul is not Empty.It's full with love and pain.

My aim is to Empower women to defend themselves

I Emigrant into the unknown land.

I may not be a emcee but i'm sure i can out battle them anytime of the month.

Wouldnt it be cool to be ruled by a Emir?

I have noticed that the Somali race is in endanger.

I may not be Endear by you guys.But i'm loved by my family and friends.

I'm just another human being surviving in this crazy and wild world.

In my many years of living i never Encounter anything but unpleaslant.

I ensonced myself in my blanket.To feel save at night.

Maybe one day i'll jump out of my skin.Out of this hooded girl and Experience the world with a pleaslant smile on my face.

But until then i'll just be the hooded girl!

[Nazra]

Sis, try somali...life , also include ur picture.

 

This is not a dating website where u write poems and describe urslef.

 

Having said that, maybe someone might be interested.

 

I couldn't read after line 4.

[Cindrella]

You got it wrong sister.I'm not looking for a soul-mate.It's something i just wrote top of my head.

[Nephissa]

I'mma leave this one alone.

[Baluug]

Since we're on the topic of E's,although it was Eloquently written,I couldn't wait for this sappy poem to End!!

[Pucca]

^who asked you? huh? :rolleyes: be nice, the poem wasn't bad.

 

modesty, sis that was beautiful...edit it and put it in the "poetry" section. and dont mind these nomads...they're just poetry challenged and bitter.

[Faarax-Brawn]

I'm very Effervecent person.

That cannot be good. I Mean seriously,you have the same traits as ENO ?

 

Oh and you spelt the word wrong. Its 'Effervescent'.

 

Extravagant ? Peherps. Effective ? Maybe not.

 

Nice tho' eccentric i would say :cool:

[juba]

damn! tough crowd! anyway modestychick not bad but it needs a little fine tunning

[SouthCboi]

*Ugaliterian Person* ?

[DeadlyVision]

Ya'all Judgemental...

This is a place where some express themselves and other impress others...

Let people write anything down with out trying to put them down...

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On my piece, I think you got the level of expression down to a note- Sister Modesty!

Don't listen to others who try you negative, they are only out to see you fail.

It was nice for you to express.

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And to all you hatters...

Know better than just to judge-

 

 

~1~

PME

DV

[Animal Farm]

Modesty_Chick I think your poem was great, it’s actually a good thing to have SOL veterans respond to your poem, often we just read’m and leave without leaving a comment. If they’re taking your poem apart is actually a good thing --- smile now :cool:

[Mafia_Gal]

i liked it :cool:

[Cindrella]

Thanks for all the one's who enjoy my free-writing poem. :cool:

 

 

And for the others i really dont care! :rolleyes:

[NomadicQueen]

Although i just joined a few days ago..i've noticed that many of the Great poems have been replyless, while those that although good, but have obvious flaws are full of them. So if you see a poem with that lonely 0 under the reply colum...give it a quick read. You never know, it might make you think.