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Check check my reality check

Reality Check

Check it's my reality check

Reality Check

Che'check-check!

...

 

I Pops the streets Son!

Popped the Cops that seized my Gun

Bouncing cheques, they couldn't freeze my Funds

B-slap the Pope and tease the Nuns

Got2Get Rich, so I chop cheese-

On The Blocks We RUN!

Me Mack and Sort-Off.

Roam tight like hand'cuffs

Made cash, catch-linkUps!

Hatters get shanked up!

Red out yo'white tank'top

Check I see u see chick,

Than act u can hang'tough!

Watch BadBoy and think Puff

U Rap, U Famous...Nig U Just'Sing Soft!

Am on the grimes on the daily times

Crimes, defining Nines!

Lines, surprising Minds!

Rhymes, land-minding Mines!

I write real while you compose church hymns-

My heart hears whatever my eye blinds

R.E.A.L.T.Y

I check for the asnwer on the Sky

No word of a lie am living to Die

Believing that Lie

They told me when I was Shy

I would never make it no matter how far I take it

Along the way one day I would end up to fake it

It was my reality check-they didn't see- they had to mistake it

Beef? I must stake it.

Dear Allah, they try me wrong with evil visions I wake wit'-

Cold sweats I SOAK-IN, having me to break fit-

Check my past step post

To death been soo close

All around me many souls rose

Like they had after-life roles

My Angel compose, what my Evil sticks in his nose

Tryin2 mess up cloaks

Get my heart on it's toes

Che'check-check how my honesty glows

My reality check my mentality flows

Be the Repoman, no Insurance watch how yo'property Goes!

bla'bla'...Rap it along

Sing that song, Ring that phone

....

Check check my reality check

Reality Check

Check it's my reality check

Reality Check

Che'check-check!

 

 

Bla'bla!

 

 

~1~

PME

DV

 

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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RealityCheck*

....

My worlds timezone

Filled with killers and mass murders

Composing the same song

It's just from Reggea to Reggeatone

The Aftermath they got their Records'on!

Bush-Rumsfield-Dick-Blare-Vladimir,

See how they going on

Am going on-LIKE

Push-Run'steel-Duck-Glare-than fall them near!

Am warzoned so, deadlyvision me clear :mad:

We Dying

We Living

We Leaving

Through all we Believe in

Is Decieving

So, why can't tha 5 Prayers be a Reason

To get you through tha 4 layers of tha Season

Islam is only peace so stop Seething!

Riba is haram so no need for leasing!

Whispering words is how Evil be Teasing

___

 

Oh how they; they stray play

My mind one way

Dealing Dimes Will Pay

Hope for Sunshine oneDay

Oh how they; they stray play

O'Oh how they; they-Theey!

My mind one way

Dealing Dimes Will Pay

Hope for Sunshine oneDay

Oh how Theey.....They-Theey!

____

 

 

Live in a world were Diamonds come b4 Life!

Cheapers creepers-

Imagine man handling more than 4 Wifes*

Going over the world to learn more lies*

Hate how U tongue fool-

Mr.President I can read the honesty from ur Eyes*

So me no nice!

Broke English like Thin-Ice*

Am at the End of the world chilling wit' Chong

Eating Chin-Rice!

Beef, Sauce With White-Guys*

Twisted Blunts and Rolled Dice-

Now am shifting-change grown Old-Wise!

Serving Democracy, All-Rights!

Even wrote days and Post nights*

Hunger with Anger

So, F-U use to be all my Replies*

Shole shot for my Foe-Surprise!

No cargo only need Knowledge for Suplies*

PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME-PME

Fear? you ain't surprising me-

Am like my Ego, you rissing me-

Dejaal Battle, My Freemasonary...

Freedom the mase in me!

Am Creative; Unchallengeably...

~~~DoneWith~~~

___

 

Oh how they; they stray play

My mind one way

Dealing Dimes Will Pay

Hope for Sunshine oneDay

Oh how they; they stray play

O'Oh how they; they-Theey!

My mind one way

Dealing Dimes Will Pay

Hope for Sunshine oneDay

Oh how Theey.....They-Theey!

____

 

 

~1~

PME

DV

 

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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AnotherFeeBase!

...

DV

PME

Fameless...

U never see me on yo'TV

Most wanted Warlord-slash-Gunman'OG!

Not my fault, see how they got me to Be?

Now am rolling tough as Teflon-

With the intelluct I reckon-

At the end be their Ecconomy I wreck on!

Let 'em feel the hot spoon of Herion-

Cashing from junkies that pair on-

Corner nooks with papers for my books

Share the ugly life I bail on!

Addicted to misunderstanding

All am planning, is freedom for my Land and-

Along with my Religion, my Believes I be Deffending!

While ya'all jus'depending

Sinning, Though U should'of been Repenting!

While ya'all jus'pretending

I keeps it real, remain 2be tha Codefendant!

For My Body, Soul & Mind is all am Representing*

No more being descendant!

Am staying HERE!

Hope yo'all HEAR!

Write Right it's only my rath yo'all FEAR!

Temper test me to get hurt OhYeah!

Am deadly through the year-

See this is how I vision

If u cut friends who got no ambition

U'll find loves prescription

This be your diction

Develope faiths addiction

Listen to my words-Never follow my footsteps in action-

Am bad rude in disription

But for my people and nation

Am for ever wishing for a better mission

Fuc tha WorldVision

Excuse my lingo my mind's just mixing*

I glue clue together but nothing is fixing!

So ama reality check out b4 I start twisting

FromHead2Page--- MoreLessSense!

 

~1~

DV

PME

 

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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Here is a lil something I wrote not too long ago, I'm a working progress and so is my writing. Still learning to get a nack for it, anyway I thought I would share.

 

IN PURSUIT OF TRUTH

 

Are we living in a dream world

In a fantasy like life

Where the sun shines always and perfection comes naturally....

A world where unhappiness and suffering are a thing of the past....

And every rainbow has a pot of gold....

A world where we recognize our dreams inside our realities...

 

Wait...

 

Does everything have to be so whirled

Destructive like a tornado

Because that’s what it feels like...in my mind

As fiction and reality clash and collide

But

Confusions never stop

And

Delusions have become the norm

 

All are in constant pursuit

Pursuing the truth

No, none of that “is there life on other planetsâ€

But whose truth is the truth

 

Delusions are the norm

Pursuing the truth becomes

Through the youth

The future of our tomorrow

 

Are you praying to borrow another day!

Because you have been set apart to fay

In making what is only a dream into reality

So realize!

So realize

so realize

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Nice Piece BlueEpocha...

...

Freebased Poetry~

~

Imagine all I been through?

Swam as a seed to find my kingdom

Amongs millions of other seeds,

It's all true

Less made it along the way had to come 1st boosting speed,

For my freedom

My gliding motion taking short cuts with emotion

Witnessed many causing comotion and dying in portion

My only fear was my Moms wouldn't get an abortion

So I would make it, So I made it

Came out!

Heard better, saw clear, felt my 1st hug

Feeling I still can't explain

Nothing I do could pay her

so I share my lifes loveletter, no fear won't bug

Grew sane, insane feeling sain, major me only I can cause my own pain

Same as same goes for you whatever is your name,

Never budge, please I beg please never bug

Met up with similiar Shhh in this living

Believing I won't get so long as am needing

For sure it's air, food, rest and the rest I avoid that got me bleeding!

Bleeding-Bleeding-end up pleading

Blood'in Blood'out come, come vision all the ugly am seeing

Will I be judge for being the witness to many families in Africa that ain't eating

No wonder I am far from happy, constantly seething

My mind boils

Thoughts of hot oils

Outch like filling bites on Tint-foils

My heart hurts

My mind curves

My time course; leaving me along fine shores

Yet, can't avoid feelings of drowning

Not cause I can't swim, simply I won't swim with force

Taking back all their supports

On a stable living, hold backs on Airports

Cavity checks; reminding me of Reality Checks

This is not me and I could never be

So long as am playing friendly amongs my enemy!

Feel for my brothers being mass murdered,

knowing I am next I wait still giving them their respects

I saw Flip-This, don't miss me I'll go on a one man mission to delete all them suspects!

You know who you are, all I beef for you to keep away from my property!

I shoot to kill

Smooth and real

And this is how I feel :mad:

While they got me ill :(

Am going stiff as steel

Growing :confused: am ready to peel

Pop-Pop- To kill my kind is to kill me!

So reality check if u really feel me!

...

LikeWise: Bla'bla to some and Ahuh to most*

stay live remain safe keep it real and don't 4get to shave ;)

...

 

 

~1~

PME

DV

 

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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Originally posted by DeadlyVision:

No wonder I am far from happy, constantly seething

My mind boils

Thoughts of hot oils

Outch like filling bites on Tint-foils

My heart hurts

My mind curves

My time course; leaving me along fine shores

Yet, can't avoid feelings of drowning

Not cause I can't swim, simply I won't swim with force

Alright I have nothing, that was BRILLIANT and I wont try to match it, not yet anyway lol.

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I bleed through the papers, to express my stress/

verbally I'm speechless, mentally depressed/

So here I confess, poeticly/

So please read this carefully/

 

I've learned to share nothing, but the sun and moon/

beans, bullets, band-aids, hand grenades, and platoons/

Walking under this blue dome, all alone, far from home/

In a country stolen from Indians, they now call their own/

Following laws enforced by corrupted police/

where we imprison in the name of freedom, kill in the name of peace/

Walking by children with no shoes on their feet/

past the veterans sifting trash for something to eat/

I walked up the steps and knelt at Lincoln's feet/

and wept in vein while he remained in his seat/

I looked to the Capital, such a symbol of wealth/

neglecting our elderly with diminishing health/

politics, red tape, and government bureaucracy/

Home sweet Home our democracy of hypocrisy/

Have you slept on the street/

with the broken glasses?

and seen the ruin/ Fortune passes!

Have you been in the lines of downcast faces/

who have no jobs? Poverty embraces!

I ask so many questions, like who and why?

What if in life's journey you turned left instead of right/

Is our lives pre-destined or do we really get a vote?

I know we are characters in a book our creator wrote?

Are thing's really the way that they seem?

Or are we a product of someones dream?

It's easy to drift and continplate over those things/

But stress and uncertainty is all that those things bring/

But the one and only for sure thing I've come to learn/

Is to LOVE and be LOVED in return/

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BlueEpocha & Intelluctual_Poet

Out'standing writing, major with it-

....

 

Reality is there's soo much pain in my brain

I got to paint with my blood stain

How the worlds going I wonder how I remain

From going insane from all this Evil play'n

To act Saint, Oh damn it it's a SHAME!

With strong faith and powers to tame

It's lame to fame the same vien cussing yo'creators name*

It's Main*

They fear the disdant MAN*with no shoes limping with the cane!

On far off the coast we wish to pose with heart remain on our toes

Killing confusion peeling my solution on SOL I post!

And suddently my soul ROSE!

To after life I never seen soo up CLOSE!

Praying for Heavenly dreams fearing Hell SHOWS!

Good and Bad whatever you earn is all Yours>>Youse!

Going down the list

And all I ask amongst many is

"Why is Islam Dissed?"

Flushing the Qur'an down the toilet when it's should be kissed*

Leaving me demented with walls I fist

Till I break my wrist following the Devils mist!

Even if Osama died would he be missed?

Know with Bush gone world would be in bliss

I ask with anger how it came to this?

It's evident, my words are orders

Crossing borders under main strip waters!

Inviding wariors causing Riots*

And Aaaaaaaaaaa it's like reading Quranic Iyats!

From the Judge to the Pope I say they all Liers!

Believe me not, ama let u know it's getting hot

To higher hights releasing explosive kites

Composing Mushroom skies, We to serve for their Rights!

Too much to express, if I go on I may touch ur stress__

So ama leave this shine with nylon lights!

 

~1~

DV

PME

 

Same'O

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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You see I intended to

But then I just couldn’t pull through

I had the courage too

But my fingers where telling me not too

It was a fight mind over body

And in the end lets just say I’m sorry

When I finally tried to

something just came over me

Like a cloud covering the SUNSHINE

It could have been my insecurity

Or it’s cuz I lack maturity

Either case I’d like to apologize

 

I know I’m like 3 hours late

And even now I’m contemplating doing it

But then I just can’t commit

Don’t tell me I already know I must admit

There is no commitments attached he said

I guess I’m a coward

And you sure don’t make me feel empowered

Actually you’re pretty intimidating come to think of it

But still in any case I’d like to apologize

 

Does an apology suffice?

I’d sure like some advice!

I admit I aint no marry jane

Nor am I insane

I’ve tried to explain

And I hope maybe we can try again

Next time I’ll holla back

You can count on that

 

 

Give me some feed back people would you accept my apology

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No worries boo' it's just been

Something I felt that made me steam

Heart beat rissing

Actions, surprising

No needs for apology, 1st I should've been

Compermising

See how u thought of it

But time was against me...couldn't paus it

Wish I had lot of it

Guess it was ur wiz that caused it

For me to rush

Confidence wouldn't let me hush

Guess I felt u were so, so tempting to touch

It's all hood I won't pretending to grudge

Whatever the case

It's was the time, not sure if it was the place

 

Many hate I love not to act better

Yet, just to attempt that higher ladder

Plain; let it be my letter

No strings attached; so whatever was the matter

Don't Matter*

Give it a chance let it dewell in time

Mind over Body

Mine over yours, lets shine

lol

I goes original, sorry no pick up line*

Let me know if u type to hold my stick up nine

Yes I mean the 45

Ain't hard nor soft just love 2stay alive

Do any means to survive

System ain't got nothing on me, I blast'fo'me life

Made ties with the Man so I got no complaints for am wise

Cocky. Yes!

Don't read into it, it's just I know what to look when I open my eyes!

Could be money or a joke that's funny

For the basics of life I feel to compermise

Am many things but poor minded

Ur boredoms I excite like boil oil does to fries

Dang Am BORED :rolleyes:

 

P.S wait till July15 b4 u try anything Viewer Discretion*

 

~1~

PME

DV

U'noe da Rest*

 

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

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I got beef with the system

I believe u should listen

Young boys 'n' girls u got 2vision

Ur future preception whats ur ambition?

One Two am here to

Have u camp with my concentration

Know u got no appreciation for what am wishing

Laugh to make fun I understand ur ignorance conception

It's ur weak intention

Thinking u a Thug a Ganster when u really looking for a simple hug

Am ur prescription

Take me am ur wisdom ur well being medication

Hear me am that anoying noise u hate to mention

Give it a chance and vision how I build u a mansion

No lectures am just the love inspector hate detector so join my session

Something like honesty being part of a blunt rotation

Don't miss it

Ignorant?

Try and diss it

I go on to reverse ur rejection

Know ur hearts pain could be ur infection

Fear to try again u scare to face ur fiction

Confused in confusion

Abuse all ur solution

I say let free and let Allah be ur protection

4get 'bout Ms.Phat booty, she ain't down for ur seduction

Ur pickup lines are weak in ever section

U be crossed like a christian between Heaven and Hell entersection

What'll you Do? when this is ur reflection!

Who cares? I done my mess, now am realest to confess-

wrote it all to address, letting my skin to glow with gold complexion!

While baggy limping with all the wrong intention

Got sold in every Auction

Drugs, Clubs, Drinking, Music, Sex all though u get none

U set to let dumn whats yo'function?

Hells redemtion

Enjoy ur glamore and glory don't worry Evil already filled up ur application

U done wit'...

 

I repent for I've saked all my wisdom for ********* -

_

 

 

~1~

PME4Me

DV

 

None Understand This, It's Like They've All Gone Brandish!

 

 

Same o'song different Tune!

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