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Eloquent in his speech

Considerate in his manner

Patient with his temper

Attentive of his tone

The perfect MAN

 

Sweet when he should be

Protective absolutely

Confident with himself

Conceited about me

Always ready to please

The perfect MAN

 

At least 6 feet tall

Smells “fresh to deathâ€

Nice Build

And always clean shaven(some exceptions can be made)

And don’t forget his attire

Prada

Gucci

Polo

 

Who am I kidding?

Clean clothes

Nice colors

That’s all I really need

Someone who truly loves me

Entirely

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J.Lee   

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Who am I kidding?

Clean clothes

Nice colors

That’s all I really need

Someone who truly loves me

Entirely

Lol. That is all we really need isn't it? Deep and simplistic. Very moving and meaningful. Worth reading and enjoyable.

 

Keep Writting.

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raula   

At least 6 feet tall

Smells “fresh to deathâ€

Nice Build

the height is extremely crucial in my part ;) mucho gracious and yes tha's all I NEED :D;)

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raula   

As I prepare to dive

In this vast sea world

I hope to find some

Friendly fish

Some corals

Some oysters to

extract that special

Jewel inside

A pearl

Just one pearl

The one best fit

For me

The water is clear

But the sea is not

It is full of wrecks

A testament to an imbalance

My coach advices

“Your are on your

own, the sea is at rageâ€

I overlook and lunge

to the deep blue waters

In hopes of finding

that friendly fish

that pearl

that jewel

that when I wear

Satisfies

Signifies

Soothes

 

I went scuba diving

Or maybe

My mind is just hypnotized

;)

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Nice ladies. Nice!

 

As my sister poet Rima said;

'it's pointless searching for a rock,

when I know of the rubies amongst men'

 

Ruby= well grounded brother with beautiful islamic mannerism. smile.gif

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The Perfect Man

 

The man to judge

against all men

 

Well I want somebody

that is a nobody

for nobody is perfect

so perfect

their imperfections

are perfect

their flaws

are a treasure chest

like a gold D cup Bra

Dig?

I want somebody

that is....

Complex like Orwell

Poetic as Hemmingway

Attitude of Malcolm X

You know the kind

that boast and stay

conceited with an

archaic smile..

Word is bond

but 007 lied to me

Mentality

Perhaps I want him

to be funny like Cigaal Shiidaad

or kind of like my grand dad

You know old but gold

but at heart Young and wise

or maybe a Qamis wearing

Kutab reading

preaching One Ummah

brotha

Dig?

Kind of like a jam to

my peanut butter

You know

A man to judge

against all Men

but understand A man

is what I want

A man that doesn't need

me to feel like a Man

but embodies the essence

the word..

Dig?

Kind of like My Man

The standard of which

I judge

all Men.

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Mansha-allah. Here is another of mine-enjoy. I call it: Sediments from a far-fetched fantasy

 

That white silk cloth

That swirls from the window

In a bungalow high

Overlooking the seaside

The cool breeze

Caressing its contours

Whispering compassionately

To each other

Like an enchanted couple

Jubilant by their union

The admiration in their eyes

Verification to their love

Cuspid within that

Soft caress

Fused between

That ocean breeze

Stroking that

White silk cloth

Is my image of

The perfect man

Like the intermingle

Between that

White silken

Hugged by the

Velvety sea zephyr

The result is a

Masculine silhouette

Configuration yet

Tender in essence

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^^ Masha allah, raula! I salute your artistic poetry! waanka cabsaday qofyahey waxaad meesha kusoo bandhigtay. Ileen gabdhaha waxay la bukeen waa gabay iyo geeraar english ah, ehehehehe, ma anaan garan, ii wad bal sheekada .... :D:D

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^^^Maxaa i tiri walaaleey? Ma fahmin, laakiin hadeey wax xun tahay waxaan ku dhihi lahaa adna lagu yiri waxaad i tiri! :D:D

 

Raula, when will you make a poetry for me, cause I need one desperately.

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