Paragon Posted November 26, 2004 If her presence equates summer's day, If her smiles are the morning's glow, If her soothing voice is a song in itself If her hair's darkness is a night's veil If her sigh makes the spring leaves fall Is she not like wind, sun or a song? Is she not all seasons in a single soul? If like rivers her kindness to me flows If like gold her word to my heart melts, If like dream myself in herself is lost, If like comfort my soul with her rests, Is she not more than love and hate? Is she not a cause for a man to die? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Diamante Posted November 26, 2004 wow...i liked that Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
- Femme - Posted November 26, 2004 Is she not a cause for a man to die? *sigh* Yes. But why dont they do it? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J.Lee Posted November 27, 2004 Diamante...I love the signature. lol J-11...Dang Waawaray (My broken somali)Brother Mansha'allah.. this poem is Amazing with its simplicity...wow. simply leaves one breathless. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted November 28, 2004 Wow This is absolutely beautiful wallahi Mansha allaah keep them comming bro Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Diamante Posted November 28, 2004 LoL Msword...cheers luv try it...it's a great money saver too Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sheherazade Posted November 29, 2004 It must be love, love, love... I like it, I like it, I like it... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Muhammad Posted November 29, 2004 wow somebody is sitting on a cload!! keep it raining bro! just finished surving your poetry section!! great stuff!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thinkerman Posted November 29, 2004 Beautifull stuff Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Benevolent_ Beauty Posted November 29, 2004 remind me of the dude that died for dat hodan chick..lol ..yeah..cilmi bodheri **patz herself in the back..**...kudoz 2 me for rememberin' da name...... ....sweet tho... J-11....reading ur poetry is like unsung pleasure there is simply no way to describe it...no common measure Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted December 4, 2004 ^^^ Thanks sister The rest of the ladies and Totti thank you so much. I am glad you liked the poem. "It mus be love" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
QUANTUM LEAP Posted December 4, 2004 Well aint that nice.......I would add this to it .... Is she not cause for love and hate! Is she not what either prolongs ones life Is she not the cause for an early grave! Is she not abitter pill made easy to swallow! Ofcouse it may not fit in with the love....but stuff that love is made of... Allaa wilku jacayl baa diilay.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted December 4, 2004 ^^^ Lol Join the Camp Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Passion_4_Fashion Posted December 7, 2004 ^^^mamma mia...my brother you sure do know how to appereciate good woman..what the world needs is more of you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MR ORGILAQE Posted December 7, 2004 beer jileeca nagadaaya.Is adkeeya rag buu ilaahey idinkadhigeye!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
