Psychedelic Posted October 14, 2002 Hello my fellow Malis. I dont know if its just me or what but aint you people getting sick of these "feel good happy" poems?? Well i am. I want to get to the dark side of it all. I want to get deep inside the raw emotions like anger, envy, sorrow, guilt etc.. Anyone of yall have any poems that repersent or fit that category please feel free to share. Let me be a lady and start it off... This poem is called Echo. Through the slient echos, I hear the trumpets of doom. If only i was inspired, to see beyond this gloom. These false prophcies still mislead, The desire for power exceeds me. The rapture inscripted in the hyrioglphs, Still extends beyond bliss. Provide me shelter from all this pain, Provide me shelter from torrential rain. Provide me cover from the dark powers, That are set out to empower. Whispers still echo, The dark fate still calls. Am i to share the same fate, As a hollow empty soul. :confused: :confused: :confused: :confused: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nuune Posted October 14, 2002 lady vicious, first welcome to somaliaonline. very nice poem indeed,i enjoyed almost,thank u!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
La-y-La Posted October 14, 2002 I walk with my eyes half closed i feel the weight of the world too much pressure too many lies who could see the real me who would see me friendly it is the world against me am not scared am just tired tired of the same ol same ol shi*t yesterday is long gone and the whole continent of africa believes i am a hypocrite the destructon of families but nobody knows the real me am all grown up yet i aint ready 4 this world!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted October 15, 2002 I have always been intruiged with the world of darkness (maybe thats why my little brother calls me a vampire) very gloomy and dark poem ...I liked it, as for my own dark poems those are too personal. Maybe some other time.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Psychedelic Posted October 21, 2002 Nuune thank you for that lovly welcome. najmah_03 thank you for your input a very shady poem, you seemed to of caught my emotions at this very moment in your poem what can i say but its expressive and i love it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted October 23, 2002 Under-world's ooze to surface. Jet black darkness with magnitudes of depth, which no light fathoms its gloomy stealth. Harrowing, echoes of ghosts with crooked nails, dripling dirt, of pus and sticky sharp tongues. Crowling skeletons of laser beam eye balls, Standing center of them is you visible like star falls. Masters of fright entertaining you with fear, Scratching, so eager to sip your virgin blood. The earth upon which u stand boling with lava of decay, drums of feast get louder to disturb your soul. Fleets of vimpire guest arrive in time for share, With them comes demonised scavenging volture. Awaited is the warewolf who priests the farewell, with him comes the accomplices, all of the worst. You're standing, shivering and tear dropping, Chewing nails in fear and ghosts terrorising. Shaking, your heart beating 10 times faster, While your thighs held tight keeping safer. You are confused, outnumbered by deseased souls, Creatures of the darkness all before your eyes. More guests to come from above and below you feet, The ground upon which you stand is a guest's way, Cracks apear, earth gives way to a torturesome baby, The King ghost's son, the rightful prince, oozes from the group while all skeletonly clap. Demons chewing your sandals to sharpen teeth, To bite off your flesh in cruelty and horror. just seconds before the first bite of the prince, You nightmares ends, sends you out of bed screaming MOMA! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akademik Posted October 23, 2002 Thank You, Lady Vicious,thank you for opening our dark visions my aningmatic brain is bringing thoughts and thrills Darkness Distills, and the cold creates chills Drifting father away, sifting my way to a new place a Place never to be seen, Do blind men see in dreams? Cause I cant tell, all is Black and i feel like hell spining in circles oblvious to direction, my mind open to ne infection the deep dark, i feel skin breakin off like dead tree bark No steps taken, floating away in this dark forsaken This room so empty, must it tempt me to start venting Need i shed light, try to convince that all is right pathalogical liar to my own self, wrath is logical dyier to ones wealth Profit from the darknees be still my soul, sell my heart to be filled with gold I beg with god to open the windows, i ask of to have mercy and i will let all sin go.This room my inner thoughts, my plots against whats right and wrong, i pleed it stops unmercyful bodies turn to corpses,and souls run free like horses, now wait how can I speak when even my truth is lying The tempeture rises along with my eyelids, in hopes of seeing, but all lost cause my sight lost in a desert island All this pain simple because, All this rain pouring in my life from above Sheets of darkness laid one after enother, every time i open my mouth my eyes grow closer together This black room my punishment, tourter for my actions even if i dont want it.Put here to serve eternaty apacalypse, my soul bannished from heaven love lost in this awful eclipse Oh my life lost in tragedy, all this done by my will and my happening This dark room to where i shall never escape, Alone in the dark i am left here to contemplate, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ariadne Posted October 24, 2002 I hate this feeling of helplessness Overwhelming me I can't shake off my mounting uncertainties Bitter, resentment, rage and hate Why can't I stop thinking is this My malicious fate? Red hot tears of sorrow and scorn Why am I so divided and torn? I know I wasn't always this way I use to live and love life from day to Day I fell into a tunnel of doubt and despair Not sure of who cares for me Or sure of whats out there.... I find myself driving everyone away I can't help myself I don't trust Any of them Not a single one to stay And see my soul naked and bared It makes me so vulnerable ...so scared Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Prince_of_Darkness Posted October 29, 2002 Twisted broken mirror images Drowning in a dreamworld Waking in a sweating fury Reflections of the past Haunted by memories Obstructed by pain Dreams of the future What awaits? :confused: :confused: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
La-y-La Posted October 29, 2002 thanks lady_vicious. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dantay1 Posted October 29, 2002 A is written on a slate Aids is death in disguise Adam is the father of man Anger is a weakness understand Angola is an impoverished land Alkaline is blue while Acid is red Antarctica can be cold Africa undoubtedly the land of gold Amen is said after a prayer Al-Gore was he a mayor? Ariel Sharon is a butcher Arabs have lost the big picture Alj-azeera is the truth A typical western name is Ruth Absence of reason is terror Australians have felt a tremor Acton is in west Abdi hangs around with the rest Arsenal are the best Ask anyone April is after March A rapper is a modern day slave A pill is taken in a rave Anakin is Darth Vader An archaeologist is a tomb raider Asylum seekers are to blame A gangster and a refugee is one and the same ………………………….. This short rhyme was inspired the late Somali Poet ....Carays Cise Karshe .......... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Psychedelic Posted November 3, 2002 Awww shucks, What can i say guys this really brings out the evil in me (kidding)! These poems are really good i cant believe they come from somali minds (compliment) JamaaL-11 S.U.N.S.E.T Cushtic_Cutie Prince_of_Darkness Dantay1 I just wanna thank you guys for your poems Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
