saud Posted October 11, 2002 Will you ever let go? If I give you all my heart If I give you all my love Hold you tight Thought about you day and night Will you ever let go? If I tell you all dreams and aspirations My headaches triumphs My greatest moments and not so great moments Will you ever let go? If I smiled for you Dressed for Laughed with you and cried with you Will you ever let go? Will you let go if you see me underneath it all? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Somaliprincess21 Posted October 11, 2002 that was a nice poem...uncertainty.insecurity..i like it..not most people write about it but ALL people feel it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hariir Posted October 11, 2002 Nice poem, which is obviously reflecting a certain level of love. Thanks Saud, that has been greatly apprecaited.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saud Posted October 11, 2002 This poem was actually inspired by when someone close to me accused of me of not being able to love/show love. I think love is a special thing and we should give our love those people that deserved it not just anyone who thinks they should get your love. Or anyone who will abuse it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nuune Posted October 12, 2002 very nice piece Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted October 12, 2002 a very frantic and moving poem.... Never let go this rob of hope Coz only loving can make you feel whole Only pure love is compared to a white dove We are to love, to cherish and to be in love Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starlight Posted November 9, 2002 That was a nice poem indeed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
