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I'm feeling that prophecy vibe...let a brotha get his!!!

 

In my future I can see the past repeating.

A time when people only come out in the evening.

A time when "F*ck you" is a greeting,

you only win by cheating.

little kids isn't eating,

and the smog stops your breathin'.

...I'm sleeping with one eye closed,

still in all my clothes,

just in case somebody knows

or doubts about the path that I chose,

isn't so simple as I post

But no - I'm still strugglin'.

i'm not at home

I got to use some judgement.

...little kids who need to be on punishment,

can't- 'cauze parents will get vice-verse

so kids continue curse

at old women for the fun of it.

Hard for me to stomach it.

ever since my home plummeted,

things changed so fast, where is government!!".

nobody runnin' it.

Someone shot a gun,

too bad his brother got in front of it.

The future just arrived, but it's too bad no one wanted it.

Too late to abort it 'cause our views are distorted.

I brought a camcorder to record it.....

 

 

---The future here now, keep your doors locked...

 

 

.....My poetry possessions make an impression,

Leave you thinkin n'stressin, take your mind into session, ....

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Deadly Vision,I kinda felt that , gotta be honest,

I was walking in your shoes for a minute.step by step, nicely done, from the head to page kept it real, from the start to the end.

 

Good, One...........

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Akademik   

ABC--stats.....

 

 

I guess i can consider my self an artist

but who cares?i write whats in my mind for the modest

showing kindness, like mildness man caring for the forest

i run through life's hardest and violence

And express it in honest

thats the thing that makes me diffrent than ya'll is

those who kept silence

approach life difrent than mine is

i'm weerin out with sirens

can't be defined in science

zero to minus-

is what my line is

I can relate to what you consider finest

see i can get cold at times

:mad: like million hungary hyenas

leave you clueless running around in arenas

figure i'm the cleanest

is like meeting two ninas finding who'z the meanest

this is how that kinda is

lets form aliance

call me ya highness

never say sun ain't this

put my boot so far N' tear ya anus

believe me when i say semen in me can fertilized all of chinas

sike,thats not a promise

 

 

to be continuw

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My nomadic expressions.. ;) ha ha

 

this post might be late

but today i could not awake

not fake, but in a lost state

i often shake at the thought of what life will be like

one day when i might lose my life or have a wife

might she be somali? white?Black? Asian?

my minds racin, all these thoughts and the waitin

and contemplatin, i need some hard help with the cards dealt

though friends listen, the problems are far from felt

hard to tell and even harder to find someone to listen

someone else wishin for a mission

a cause to applaud

I’d pull a pause outta my pocket and place it

on the faces of the clanist

to stop their hatred on the basis

original origin and the color of their faces

its tasteless how some treat others

while some just wanna keep cover

cause they know if they show themselves

they might lose their life or somethin else

we need to help this

cause on day its gotta be dealt with

 

 

One day.....................

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Oh wow....

Instinct Poet

Deadly Vision

n' all others

i forgot to mention...i'm honored to be at ur presence...(or so)...

 

herez a lil somethang i wrote while in Calc class...bored outta ma mind...

its not great..nor is it finished...but i know its expresses ma tru feelings...

 

exem exem

 

War

seems i can't escape from it

its knocking at ma door

 

War

a legal killing spree

where da criminals run free

 

War

a raging beast

in da middle east and in Somalian streets

 

War

whether for money or oil

its inevitable turmoil

 

War

Weapons And Rage

 

War

lb of greed

2 spoonfulls of fear

a touch of "all you can be"

optional: civilians to be freed

 

War

created by Evil

practiced by man

 

 

.......tell me wat'cha yall think...spare ma feelings tho aight..lol

 

peace

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Benovelent_Beauty.......

 

Thats what i'm talking about...

WhOa, W.A.R....

 

One...let me see more......

 

express ya mind..BENOVELENT,

BEAUTY i like the cent of it

try you thoughts to never let

dry rust for permanent

exercise to ever get

the word play for the fun of it....

 

nice piece.......

 

 

.................NOMADIC EXPRESSIONZ..................

If ya can't express ya self, than what you livin' for?

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Ma mother cries

She says don’t do that.

I tell lies about where I be at

In the mosque, she envisions her daughter on a prayer mat

But really

she at the mall

runnin’ around wit different hoodrats

I mean…I luv ma mom…I’ll say it out loud

It’s just that

She’s in a different crowd…

livin’ unda a different cloud

 

Her mother cries

Becuz confusionz hijacked

Her mind and slaughter her heart

Her daughters out all hours of da nite

“its just a wedding’.. u told me its alright”

truth be told, it was really Prom Nite

“I couldn’t tell her…that would start a fight…not to mention she’ll neva let me outta her sight”

Weeks pass, she’s pregnant, gains a lil weight

Her energy is gone,

She's loosin’ her shape,

no more a bangin' figure eight

Who woulda guessed it, It was just a blind date

“he told me he luved me..that I was his soul mate”

 

mother doesn’t get it

cuz back home weight

was sign of good fate

until her daughter begins to throw up every plate

tiresome one every date

 

“The Shame u brought to this house”

mom first thought is not abort now

nor the courthouse

“No!

we shall save the family name and make him your lawfully wedded spouse”

 

 

so she sits there contemplatin’

constantly debatin’…

rarely negating

she can end a life that can possible make hers extremely elating

on the otha hand

marry a fool who is extremely degrading

thoughts of suicide are invading

her mind

as she wonders thru life without a soul for aiding......

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED...gotta hit da books now..but "I WILL BE BAK"...see watchu' done did Instinct Poet..lol..u know ur encouragement is at fault if this poem isn't published...riite"

 

until then...

 

Salaamu Caleykum Waraxmatu"llaahi Wa' Barakaat

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Haseena   

Hi it's my first time posting in here- and I must tell you folks you are very good with what you do. A dear friend of mine told me to visit this site- and now I don't wanna leave it. I wrote this poem today/tonight and wanted to share it with you, I didn't want to start on with a posting of my own- you all seem to like it in here so I'll keep it right here.

PS. Hjärtat sorry, but this doesn't change any of my feelings it rather sorts it out, read it twice and see your meaning in it.

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It’s been a while since I used my pen

To express my thoughts

One may say it’s due to feelings being oppressed

I’ll say it’s due to life keeping me fixed

I ended a love story who never should’ve began

A tale doomed to ever exist

My heart it called pain for not knowing

It showed my praying that little was to be changed

Amazing how little one may be

no power to heal a bleeding soul

To uplift a grieving mind

A young soul on a road a journey is taken upon

Life enters and a bliss is beyond

Awaiting is trials of seduction round the block sin is preparing

No where is a land to be made than what Allah has approved

Yet I fail not to amuse Iblis

Strangely how I felt for two, yet a heart is placed for one

Covering the conscience with jokes to foretell a ruling made for me

Deeply I knew that wrong was made

To have it was not for me

If its to ask what are your dream I strongly would say God guide me

With pleasant visions enlisted yet a darkness pollutes the air

Coldness inside grasps my blood, grapping my thoughts

Firmly I turn to my stare

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Oh My god..is funny sometimes,to find

people you can relate with, Their words

just exquisite,see past the explicit

look close to the moral of the story.....

Haseena, nice one, don't it feel good after

you've written and expressed ya self.?

 

I wish every one who visited could read the

words of benovelent_beauty,Girl you hit the X mark

many WILL relate, without a doubt..Thats only if they read and understood, metaphorz

 

I wish that everyone could read between the lines

You could post 100 times, and still get no replies

Keep your pride, walk with your head held high

Only time will tell the truth between the lies

If you write for other minds, it's guaranteed you'll resign

Or redesign your rhymes to climb

Up the SomaliaOnline, ladder of success, don't stress over text

Make sure you balance writtens with real express from the reality tests

Appreciate good feedback, to earn respect, give respect

Don't neglect eclectic sources of superb word play

Hunger for Knowledge, and be careful about what you say

Manifest word play everyday without delay

Remember your just a voice,

but simply avoid overused cliches and similies

Always be yourself, and value your own identity

Write relentlessly, placing emphasis on placement

Develop some tough skin, and always stay patient ;););)

 

 

......Thank You Very much for that Piece benovelent, I took those words for granted...

 

 

Haseena, welcome to the site as well, please

write some more of your pottent pen..lol..

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Haseena   

Thank u Instinct-poet smile.gif

deadly vision- nice one

 

Here's one unfinished....can't write on it no more, wanna share it with y'll folks

 

war got man blinded

building up late mirrors

crashing houses for multiple reasons

war is to prevent happenings

stop tyranny from conquering world democracy

my mind got me thinking

Saddam is he really a bully

when come to view it bush is the real killer

I take it back democracy meaning western globosity

Who ever gave a black man a cause

A Hindi a voice An Indian a mind to get sharing from the past

Got nuclear to save the day

When all it brings is more hate to the world

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Akademik   

Aigh't this is kinda tight.I love the fact

i can put my self in in your point of view

even though some of ya lost me.

 

 

Benovelent Beauty....I love you girl..

I don't think i blinked once for that poetry

that you wrote,

 

Instinct..I'm in ya shoes, i see what you see.

 

Deadly Vision,,I can relate with you, cauze i know

most of what you talk about.

 

Honesita, same with you, I can walk in ya shoes...

 

feel me,"skin deep"

 

If i spoke the truth,

some of ya would dismiss me

without asking, why,how and what

but is life today that insists on that,

See, my mental is corrupted by tha things I cannot see,

...

 

Dang, to be continued tommorow,,Emergency runnNNN

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