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  1. You see I intended to

    But then I just couldn’t pull through

    I had the courage too

    But my fingers where telling me not too

    It was a fight mind over body

    And in the end lets just say I’m sorry

    When I finally tried to

    something just came over me

    Like a cloud covering the SUNSHINE

    It could have been my insecurity

    Or it’s cuz I lack maturity

    Either case I’d like to apologize


    I know I’m like 3 hours late

    And even now I’m contemplating doing it

    But then I just can’t commit

    Don’t tell me I already know I must admit

    There is no commitments attached he said

    I guess I’m a coward

    And you sure don’t make me feel empowered

    Actually you’re pretty intimidating come to think of it

    But still in any case I’d like to apologize


    Does an apology suffice?

    I’d sure like some advice!

    I admit I aint no marry jane

    Nor am I insane

    I’ve tried to explain

    And I hope maybe we can try again

    Next time I’ll holla back

    You can count on that



    Give me some feed back people would you accept my apology

  2. Love- Because it is better to have loved than never loved at all

    Trust- your instincts

    Believe- That anything is possible

    Fight- For a brighter future because with difficulty ease is not far behind

    Carry the burden- because good deeds are never gone unnoticed

    Laugh- Because it makes the heart grow fonder

    Sleep- Because you know a better day lies ahead

    Don’t cry- Because nothing is worth your tears

    Marry- The person who you were destined to marry

    Hope- Is what makes the hurt more bearable

    Give- Because there is always someone in need

    Pray- Because the Lord is all Knowing and hears what you’re saying

    Joy- In the small things life offers

    Today-is only 24 hours and tomorrow isn’t far away

    Never make a promise- Because you don’t know what the future holds

    Wishing- is the same thing as hoping

    Wish-God grants you paradise

    Breathe-Even when the going gets tuff because someone somewhere cares for you

    Remorse- Because it shows your human

    Live- life to its fullest



    "The state of your life is nothing more than a reflection of your state of mind." :D


    Cheer up mate

  3. That poem was very thought provoking; it was a good reminder that this world is merely a test. The way you managed to place the words in a sequence which flowed so gracefully was excellent ;) . I could almost picture the whole scene in my head. Great job… Keep up the good work…


    SeE yA AroUnD!

  4. I applaud a trillion times and more.. :D:D

    First and foremost I’d like to be the first person to offically welcome you to Somalia Online.


    I loved your poem.. keep up the good work mate.. ;)

  5. Me, I know who I am

    I know myself as me

    I am the person I was raised up to be

    I am who I believe myself to be

    And know myself to be

    If you’re an introvert

    Then I must be an Extrovert

    Because I’m nothing like you

    i'm almost certain

    But I wouldn’t mind being you

    Because I like your poetry

    Its has its own flowetry

    You’re confused about your identity

    But I’m sure you’ve got a great personality

    You ask who the hell am i?

    Well Madame that’s simple

    I’m the person you know me to be

  6. Look deeper into the mirror

    And the reflection might get clearer

    For what you see is not what I perceive you to be

    Your dark eyes are very hypnotizing

    Can you see the sparkle?

    They glow and tell their own story

    A tale of glory

    Its darkness is like the night sky minus all the street lights

    And the stars visible even at those heights

    I see an aspiring poet

    A nomad with spirit

    Your eyes are half wide open

    And the reflection is hazed

    Take a deeper look

    And you’d see that

    Your exactly who you want to be

    I hope you’ll agree


    Viewer D

  7. Bus Ride




    Ever feel like the world is against you

    And feel like nobody really cares for you

    That if you weren’t there everybody would continue

    Doing things they’ve always been doing

    Going places they’ve always been going.

    Ever stop to and notice……



    Ever notice how people stare at you

    And when you look at them they pretend not to see you

    Wondering why you look the way you do

    Or dress in the manner that you do

    To them its oppression to me its liberation

    Evey stop to be…..



    Ever try and be someone your not

    and change your whole attitude just to fit in

    Do things you just normally wouldn’t do

    Wish you could just blend in with the background

    And blank out all that surrounds you

    Ever stop to reflect…


    Ever reflect on what’s going on in the world

    And think of what you’ve done to make a difference

    Like giving a homeless person a cup of tea for instance

    Small things can make a big impact

    And that’s a fact

    Ever close your eyes


    Ever try closing your eyes and being in that place you’ve always dreamed about

    A place where your brothers and sister aren’t dying

    And the breaking news isn’t about the increasing number of dead found in sir lanka

    Where aids doesn’t affect the people in Africa

    And people would just stop “misunderestimated†bush lol


    Every stop and think..

    You spend way to much time on the bus

    And think way to much about a lot of stuff

    That will never change

    And that I’m probably insane.


  8. Bravo! Bravo!


    Very well done if I must say so myself. I enjoyed reading all three parts of your poem..

    I’m not sure which one I like the most, it’s a tough decision because they were all just so delightful. I must agree with Word I think this is one of your best pieces.. keep up the excellent work. Wonder were all this inspiration is coming from.

  9. Everyone has something in common

    Which is the hope of a fairytale ending :D

    We’ve been programmed to it

    Cinderella found her prince

    And never heard from her since :rolleyes:


    The next question should be

    What exactly defines that fairytale for me

    My dream house

    The Ideal spouse

    2.5 children

    An intellectual boy for Dad

    And an eloquent girl for Mom


    Relationship between us that’s unbreakable

    Love that is unmistakable :cool:

    A house of serenity

    And stability


    My mother’s health

    Ensure she lives in bliss

    And never be at risk

    Of danger, being with a stranger

    Riches galore

    And much much more


    A problem arises

    But not to my surprise :eek:

    Is it possible to have that fairytale ending?

    Its mind bending


    Compromises are essential

    and sometimes are Influential

    2 bedroom house

    A decent spouse

    And God fearing offspring

    Who pray

    And get straight A’s ;)


    I’d be happy with that

    As a matter of fact….

    This life I remind myself is just a test

    And we all know the rest


    WE live the life in this world now

    and pay for it in the hereafter




  10. It’s hard to put yourself In other peoples shoes

    Hard to know how they feel

    When you haven’t gone through what they’ve been through

    But If we all took the time

    Just for a minute….

    Or maybe 2

    And thought about someone else

    I mean…..Besides you

    We could stop being sympathetic

    Which quite frankly is pathetic :rolleyes:

    (Minus the sym)

    Put your words into action

    Even if it’s just a fraction

    And make a difference for someone


    We take our life for granted

    Don’t know how good we got it

    Plenty of food to eat

    A place to sleep

    And in Indonesia

    1 million are struggling with poverty

    And got no more property

    Living on the streets

    With nothing to eat

    Children dead

    And nothing left to be said



    Me and you

    We can do

    Anything we want to

    With the right intention

    And a little perspiration

    We can help

    Build that

    Better brighter

    Future we always dream about

    And maybe have that fairytale ending :D

    That’s always talked about


  11. Poets: What motivates you to write a poem/piece?


    Generally what motivates me to write a poem, is my mood, how I’m feeling, what’s going on in my life or somebody I knows life. Other times I’m inspired to write when I read someone else’s poem and I believe that it was so good it needs a responding poem.


    Poets: How would you describe your style?

    I really wouldn’t know how to describe my style, I think its just plain and simple straight to the point icon_razz.gif



    Poets: Do you see imperfection in your poem that others don't/ are you satisfied with what you write?


    LOL.. I always am able to find mistakes in my poems. :( . I really don’t have much patience, I write when I’m in the mood and just post it right away.. I don’t take the time and check it over and see if I can improve it. I’m really never 100 percent satisfied with my work but hey…. Its all gravy as long as the message was understandable


    Poets and readers: Who is your favorite nomad poet? explain why please (1 or many) (I mean when you see a poem by this nomad you just have to read it)


    That’s a tough one.. its so hard to pick who I admire the most because there are so many talented poets, but If I had to chose off the top of my head I think it would be Deadly vision, Jamaal and Ms word, icon_razz.gif ….. I really like there style of writing.. Deadly and jamaal can write about anything and make it seem interesting I love that. Ms word, I like her style, and her pieces are always enjoyable to read..


    Poets and readers: Which nomad's style of writting (other than yours )do you wish to emulate?


    I would not really like to imitate anybodies style in particular. I think everyone should be unique.. No need to steal anyone else’s style :D



  12. Hey everybody thought i'd hit yall up with another one.....


    I was thinking

    Blond hair brown hair

    Is there a difference?

    Blue eyes green eyes

    Is there a difference?

    If beauty is in the eyes of the beholder

    Then there is no judge

    Of what is perfect

    And what is flawed

    Everybody is Stunning

    To that one special person

    Our outwardly appearance

    Is just the cover of our book

    And everybody knows

    That the cover can’t portray

    What’s truly inside

    Our passion for poetry

    Our respect for our parents

    Our love for the great One

    Ignorance might be the reason for your despair

    You never know what you might be missing

    For every person beauty has its own definition

    Some its long legs

    Others its big lips

    for me its brains

    The capability of using the right words

    At the right time

    Can turn the ugly duckling

    To the dazzling swan

    Words to me

    Are the essence of beauty