Viewer Discretion
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Love- Because it is better to have loved than never loved at all
Trust- your instincts
Believe- That anything is possible
Fight- For a brighter future because with difficulty ease is not far behind
Carry the burden- because good deeds are never gone unnoticed
Laugh- Because it makes the heart grow fonder
Sleep- Because you know a better day lies ahead
Don’t cry- Because nothing is worth your tears
Marry- The person who you were destined to marry
Hope- Is what makes the hurt more bearable
Give- Because there is always someone in need
Pray- Because the Lord is all Knowing and hears what you’re saying
Joy- In the small things life offers
Today-is only 24 hours and tomorrow isn’t far away
Never make a promise- Because you don’t know what the future holds
Wishing- is the same thing as hoping
Wish-God grants you paradise
Breathe-Even when the going gets tuff because someone somewhere cares for you
Remorse- Because it shows your human
Live- life to its fullest
"The state of your life is nothing more than a reflection of your state of mind."
Cheer up mate
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Well I must say, this I think is one of the best pieces you’ve wrote. I really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work
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That poem was very thought provoking; it was a good reminder that this world is merely a test. The way you managed to place the words in a sequence which flowed so gracefully was excellent
. I could almost picture the whole scene in my head. Great job… Keep up the good work… SeE yA AroUnD!
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I applaud a trillion times and more..
First and foremost I’d like to be the first person to offically welcome you to Somalia Online.
I loved your poem.. keep up the good work mate..
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Speechless…
good work …
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Ya when I was choosing my name I didn’t want it to be gender specific.
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LOOOOOOOOL
if your talking about me.. i'm not a male..lool
yes the name is rather masculine i agree
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Me, I know who I am
I know myself as me
I am the person I was raised up to be
I am who I believe myself to be
And know myself to be
If you’re an introvert
Then I must be an Extrovert
Because I’m nothing like you
i'm almost certain
But I wouldn’t mind being you
Because I like your poetry
Its has its own flowetry
You’re confused about your identity
But I’m sure you’ve got a great personality
You ask who the hell am i?
Well Madame that’s simple
I’m the person you know me to be
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Look deeper into the mirror
And the reflection might get clearer
For what you see is not what I perceive you to be
Your dark eyes are very hypnotizing
Can you see the sparkle?
They glow and tell their own story
A tale of glory
Its darkness is like the night sky minus all the street lights
And the stars visible even at those heights
I see an aspiring poet
A nomad with spirit
Your eyes are half wide open
And the reflection is hazed
Take a deeper look
And you’d see that
Your exactly who you want to be
I hope you’ll agree
Viewer D
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Bus Ride
Ever feel like the world is against you
And feel like nobody really cares for you
That if you weren’t there everybody would continue
Doing things they’ve always been doing
Going places they’ve always been going.
Ever stop to and notice……
Ever notice how people stare at you
And when you look at them they pretend not to see you
Wondering why you look the way you do
Or dress in the manner that you do
To them its oppression to me its liberation
Evey stop to be…..
Ever try and be someone your not
and change your whole attitude just to fit in
Do things you just normally wouldn’t do
Wish you could just blend in with the background
And blank out all that surrounds you
Ever stop to reflect…
Ever reflect on what’s going on in the world
And think of what you’ve done to make a difference
Like giving a homeless person a cup of tea for instance
Small things can make a big impact
And that’s a fact
Ever close your eyes
Ever try closing your eyes and being in that place you’ve always dreamed about
A place where your brothers and sister aren’t dying
And the breaking news isn’t about the increasing number of dead found in sir lanka
Where aids doesn’t affect the people in Africa
And people would just stop “misunderestimated†bush lol
Every stop and think..
You spend way to much time on the bus
And think way to much about a lot of stuff
That will never change
And that I’m probably insane.
lool
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Hey farah. I thought that was a very humorous piece.. Keep up the good work
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Bravo! Bravo!
Very well done if I must say so myself. I enjoyed reading all three parts of your poem..
I’m not sure which one I like the most, it’s a tough decision because they were all just so delightful. I must agree with Word I think this is one of your best pieces.. keep up the excellent work. Wonder were all this inspiration is coming from.
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Everyone has something in common
Which is the hope of a fairytale ending
We’ve been programmed to it
Cinderella found her prince
And never heard from her since :rolleyes:
The next question should be
What exactly defines that fairytale for me
My dream house
The Ideal spouse
2.5 children
An intellectual boy for Dad
And an eloquent girl for Mom
Relationship between us that’s unbreakable
Love that is unmistakable :cool:
A house of serenity
And stability
My mother’s health
Ensure she lives in bliss
And never be at risk
Of danger, being with a stranger
Riches galore
And much much more
A problem arises
But not to my surprise :eek:
Is it possible to have that fairytale ending?
Its mind bending
Compromises are essential
and sometimes are Influential
2 bedroom house
A decent spouse
And God fearing offspring
Who pray
And get straight A’s
I’d be happy with that
As a matter of fact….
This life I remind myself is just a test
And we all know the rest
WE live the life in this world now
and pay for it in the hereafter
BUT IT NEVER HURT ANYONE TO DREAM
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This is a great example of why I think DV is “one†of my favorite poets on this site.. Keep it coming
Loved it
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It’s hard to put yourself In other peoples shoes
Hard to know how they feel
When you haven’t gone through what they’ve been through
But If we all took the time
Just for a minute….
Or maybe 2
And thought about someone else
I mean…..Besides you
We could stop being sympathetic
Which quite frankly is pathetic :rolleyes:
(Minus the sym)
Put your words into action
Even if it’s just a fraction
And make a difference for someone
We take our life for granted
Don’t know how good we got it
Plenty of food to eat
A place to sleep
And in Indonesia
1 million are struggling with poverty
And got no more property
Living on the streets
With nothing to eat
Children dead
And nothing left to be said
Me and you
We can do
Anything we want to
With the right intention
And a little perspiration
We can help
Build that
Better brighter
Future we always dream about
And maybe have that fairytale ending
That’s always talked about
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good stuff yall. keep up the good work.. And welcome back
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MY BAD
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Poets: What motivates you to write a poem/piece?
Generally what motivates me to write a poem, is my mood, how I’m feeling, what’s going on in my life or somebody I knows life. Other times I’m inspired to write when I read someone else’s poem and I believe that it was so good it needs a responding poem.
Poets: How would you describe your style?
I really wouldn’t know how to describe my style, I think its just plain and simple straight to the point
Poets: Do you see imperfection in your poem that others don't/ are you satisfied with what you write?
LOL.. I always am able to find mistakes in my poems.
. I really don’t have much patience, I write when I’m in the mood and just post it right away.. I don’t take the time and check it over and see if I can improve it. I’m really never 100 percent satisfied with my work but hey…. Its all gravy as long as the message was understandablePoets and readers: Who is your favorite nomad poet? explain why please (1 or many) (I mean when you see a poem by this nomad you just have to read it)
That’s a tough one.. its so hard to pick who I admire the most because there are so many talented poets, but If I had to chose off the top of my head I think it would be Deadly vision, Jamaal and Ms word,
….. I really like there style of writing.. Deadly and jamaal can write about anything and make it seem interesting I love that. Ms word, I like her style, and her pieces are always enjoyable to read..Poets and readers: Which nomad's style of writting (other than yours )do you wish to emulate?
I would not really like to imitate anybodies style in particular. I think everyone should be unique.. No need to steal anyone else’s style
KEEP IT REAL
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Hey everybody thought i'd hit yall up with another one.....
I was thinking
Blond hair brown hair
Is there a difference?
Blue eyes green eyes
Is there a difference?
If beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Then there is no judge
Of what is perfect
And what is flawed
Everybody is Stunning
To that one special person
Our outwardly appearance
Is just the cover of our book
And everybody knows
That the cover can’t portray
What’s truly inside
Our passion for poetry
Our respect for our parents
Our love for the great One
Ignorance might be the reason for your despair
You never know what you might be missing
For every person beauty has its own definition
Some its long legs
Others its big lips
for me its brains
The capability of using the right words
At the right time
Can turn the ugly duckling
To the dazzling swan
Words to me
Are the essence of beauty
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I really enjoyed that one.. keep up the good work!!!
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You see I intended to
But then I just couldn’t pull through
I had the courage too
But my fingers where telling me not too
It was a fight mind over body
And in the end lets just say I’m sorry
When I finally tried to
something just came over me
Like a cloud covering the SUNSHINE
It could have been my insecurity
Or it’s cuz I lack maturity
Either case I’d like to apologize
I know I’m like 3 hours late
And even now I’m contemplating doing it
But then I just can’t commit
Don’t tell me I already know I must admit
There is no commitments attached he said
I guess I’m a coward
And you sure don’t make me feel empowered
Actually you’re pretty intimidating come to think of it
But still in any case I’d like to apologize
Does an apology suffice?
I’d sure like some advice!
I admit I aint no marry jane
Nor am I insane
I’ve tried to explain
And I hope maybe we can try again
Next time I’ll holla back
You can count on that
Give me some feed back people would you accept my apology