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TheParagon
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An Ode to the Ethereal Harlot

Squeezed flesh of moistened warmth
Crafted edges of delicate furnishing
Of soft, tender tissues yet of strength
That narrow canal ebbing, vanishing

Deflowering shyly to stiffened muscle
Welcoming gladly a pleasing struggle
Of excited spirit and pleasured body
Making the heart be ripe and ready

In accepting the ecstasies that come
With bodily fluids that joyfully come
Oh, is your flesh not a heap of pleasure
An ethereal gift most men treasure?



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My first ever encounter with a pornish poem. Cool

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What an explicit poem. Heh.
Who is it by, Paragon? (not you I hope).

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^Hush hush! I can't delete or edit it.

Disclaimer: it's someone else's.



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I like :-D

Can you give us the name of the poet?

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We must not overestimate the calamities of our age. A misplaced rigorism is less dangerous than an improper liberalism.

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^Do you mind if I tell you the poet's name in private? [Big Grin] It'd be much better that way. I don't want the likes of NGONGE to know, lest they use this poem against him [Smile] .


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[Big Grin]

Sure. Although I may not be able to keep his name a secret. The poet's got talent and experience, many would like to have a word with him and I can't be selfish..

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^In that case I'll keep his name secret. It's best adviced if I do that [Big Grin] .

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quote:
Originally posted by Isseh:
An Ode to the Ethereal Harlot

In accepting the ecstasies that come
With bodily fluids that joyfully come
Oh, is your flesh not a heap of pleasure
An ethereal gift most men treasure?

Aaaaawwwww....If I wasn't a diehard fan of yours I would've sued you for writing such a laab kicis piece but I enjoyed reading it and as always you represent and deliver it for beloved Garissa...


Glad to have you back again Mr Gamal.
[Smile]


Peace, Love & Unity.

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Paragon you promised a private conference, you must deliver.

I'm so bored I've taken it upon myself to find out who wrote this piece of interesting work and who Isseh and Mr Gamal are and what they've got to do with anything.

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^I am still in the process of delivering. Anyway, what have you found out with your looking around? Anything worrying? [Big Grin]

There are many culprits around, and I see you've Sharlock Holm'ed Gamal and Isseh. Don't go further, you'll know what you need to know [Wink] .

BOB,

Lol. Pole kaka. It happens sometimes, you know. Habari ya Garissa? you should go see it soon man, it's getting built like there's no tomorrow.

Asante bro...

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Mod delete this please.

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LOL- Oh my, such filth and from you dearest Paragon? I am pleasantly surprised, who would have guess that such filth would prove to be very becoming on you?

(Laughs darkly and skips off)

Ps I very much disapprove of the title, its an insult to women.



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Siren, did you say filth? No it isn't my dear. Heck, I'll have you know that it's the beautified version what society shuns. Just imagine a human devoid of all morals, where matter is matter and mind is mind. Just imagine the honesty to flashy desires fulfilled without any moral inhibitions. A sort pleasure-seeking similar to that of the Greek cynics but yet done for money. Then turn around and look at the environment that had produced such pleasure-seekers of today. So what is a harlot? The whore or the capitalist that worships money but pretends not to? Who as a result claims the lives of many for his excesses?

In my view thus the out-right harlot is more honourable one between the two today. I'll befriend her more than the other. [Big Grin]

So you see? It's not filth, its metaphoric. [Wink]



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